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Not too bad, it's better than I thought.
But you definitely need to stop using the word, "that"
I'd recommend signal phrase quotations, so that easier, to see the reference, instead of having to scroll all the way down to the works cited page....
always avoid using words like: "that", "thing" etc...
Like BP mentioned, it's around a B / B-
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I already turned it in, but i wanted to share it with u guys
I just sat down to read this and im pissed. Everything you said was a 100% correct. IM GONNA GET AN F THIS IS A DISASTER
Not too bad, it's better than I thought.
But you definitely need to stop using the word, "that"
I'd recommend signal phrase quotations, so that easier, to see the reference, instead of having to scroll all the way down to the works cited page....
always avoid using words like: "that", "thing" etc...
Like BP mentioned, it's around a B / B-