Colored People webseries (Directed & written by Coli member ghostwriterx) EP04 is up!

[Supercoolmayo]

I like the parts with the Indian dude

"This guy's mouth needs a proofreader"

 

[ghostwriterx]

Episode 3 is up. @StraxStrax

 

[sanityovar8ted]

Keep up the good work @ghostwriterx the blasian chick that plays the lead is rather cute.

 

[Atsym Sknyfs]

@ghostwriterx

DAMN .. that was ... short .... As soon as I got into it it was over ... what gives ...

what happened writers block so you just cut it right there?

who was the skinny chick ... let me read the credits

Whitney Hice...

 

[TheGodling]

This was a solid episode, not too overstuffed with jokes but still kept going at a good pace. Also, the timing and delivery of Jada's lines was spot-on.

 

[LauderdaleBoss]

Episode 3 is definitely going into the right direction. Too much shyt was going on in episode 2. This one was better.

 

[ghostwriterx]

@ghostwriterx

DAMN .. that was ... short .... As soon as I got into it it was over ... what gives ...

what happened writers block so you just cut it right there?

who was the skinny chick ... let me read the credits

Whitney Hice...

I'd rather it be too short then too long, at least for these early ones. Feel like 5-7 mins is a good sweet spot for a webisode. Thanks for watching.

 

[mcellas]

 

[trick]

Pretty good episode, it was short and a lot better than last week's episode. You should bring back the breh with the weird hat at some point, he's got good comedic timing

 

[Nigerianwonder]

Not feeling the camera work and editing at all. From the angles, shaking, to the zooming etc... Seems way to amateur for the amount of effort it looks like went into putting this together. With that said.. I know it takes a lot of work to go from idea to creation so props on that. Just keep perfecting your craft and dont cut corners.

 

[ghostwriterx]

Not feeling the camera work and editing at all. From the angles, shaking, to the zooming etc... Seems way to amateur for the amount of effort it looks like went into putting this together. With that said.. I know it takes a lot of work to go from idea to creation so props on that. Just keep perfecting your craft and dont cut corners.

We were going for a documentary feel, so that was on purpose.

 

[bobbiewishbone]

subs

 

[Michael's Black Son]

that Megan Thomas chick tho.....

 

[ghostwriterx]

Pretty good episode, it was short and a lot better than last week's episode. You should bring back the breh with the weird hat at some point, he's got good comedic timing

yeah that's my boy from school, we thought about casting him as Waddell for a min, but he's not old enough. Funny cat, carried the ep.

 

[steadyrighteous]

Yo, now we cooking.

This was a great ep. Like someone said, just as I was sinking into it, it ended, which isn't always a bad thing.

The dude with the hat was on point for the whole thing. I like how to story drove the dialogue rather than the other way around which happened in the first 2.