SymbolicOne09
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Ill beat and the flow is on point... feeling this ish right here
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Ill beat and the flow is on point... feeling this ish right here
SymbolicOne09
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beats dope , lyrics is good but idk bout the chorus
gotta smoke 1 and critique
SymbolicOne09
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SymbolicOne09
All Star
I like this one bruh, its got me feeling
Myrical Lyfe
In the Gutter, of the Tunnel
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
NSFW, that ender tho
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ibrokemyneck
Rookie
I feel like there's just a little too much high end going on in this one. It's kinda harsh on the ears. The low end is tame in a good way, also felt like an additional synth came in around 2:51 that made it just way additive/louder. I just got some monitors and it's hella standing out on the left pan. i know you're probably not trying to hear any critique from someone that doesnt exactly make this style, but i wanted to say that the one main lead gets kinda repetitive after a while... check this song
peep how in the middle they drop out the drums and the regular synth completely and give it a breather... i feel like your track is all thriller/killer, and we need just some air to come up to breathe for a second before we're immersed in the sound again, ya dig? right after the pause, he even brings in a different instrument to draw the melody. I know you weren't necessarily even going for this sound, but it's an awesome arrangement to peep and if done properly i think it would elevate your track to the next level. it's easier typed/said than done, but i can almost hear it. just make the listener WANT to hear the "good part" but it doesnt ahve to be playing the whole time. The drop on the yung gud track is insane and a great example. you think its gonna drop the first time and he suspends it by dropping out all the otehr elements. good shyt tho
Thunder
Rookie
What's good, good people? New here. Producer based out of everywhere. Let me know what you guys think of my work
stealthbomber
cruising at 30,000
had some problems
with soundcloud so i started a new page and got a new namewill be uploading every few days for real now
any feedback is appreciated
Kwilu
Rookie
What's up Coli fam! Just dropping some tracks I did not too long ago.
(If I had dropped that trap beat during the tourney I probably would have won lol
)Any feedback is much appreciated
Kwilu
Rookie
I agree with @ibrokemyneck you should give the main lead a breather so we can focus on the other parts of the beat. It's a little harsh too. There's a sequence when it plays smoother a less loud, I think it's better that way. It's a creative beat nonetheless.
Myrical Lyfe
In the Gutter, of the Tunnel
It's such a win/lose. I liked the part you were talking about and ventured other wise. I like the laid back open beats. But then people say there not full enough.