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[Sincere Noble]

 

[Sincere Noble]

 

[92_Bricks]

I make something close to decent and start feeling myself, then check this thread and realize how far I have to go





@TEKBEATZ @doublenegative @92 Bricks @ibrokemyneck @PlutoEighth

Let me know where I'm

The ideas are there it just sounds like your using the factory presets get better sounds the same with the drums. I like nis the most from those three songs. Just keep practicing until it all comes together.

 

[SymbolicOne09]

some new ish

 

[dakidbanks]

Full mixtape of mine.. up tempo/laid back... perfect for goin out to

 

[Jimmy ValenTime]

 

[SymbolicOne09]

some stuff i was working on last night

 

[Myrical Lyfe]

If you are a rapper, and want to get on a local EP that will be distributed to many many promotion companies and forums, Hit me up. This is a teaser.

 

[Wepa Man]

 

[drell12]

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new member. messing around with fl studio for a lil while. opinions welcome

 

[drell12]

why doesnt the embedding work for me?

 

[LOS91]

One of the first serious songs I made I also made the beat too any feedback good or bad would help

 

[ibrokemyneck]

why doesnt the embedding work for me?

You gotta take the s out of the http if you're embedding SC and take out the www so it's just http://soundcloud

 

[ibrokemyneck]

Any comments to make this track better? They are quick drafts so I can take criticism. Do you like it? Why not? I'm doing a comp on reddit working with some rappers and I want to get a good start. And just in case they aren't feeing that style I've got a more trappy version. No samples!

 

[SymbolicOne09]

Any comments to make this track better? They are quick drafts so I can take criticism. Do you like it? Why not? I'm doing a comp on reddit working with some rappers and I want to get a good start. And just in case they aren't feeing that style I've got a more trappy version. No samples!

both of these are real dope.. i like draft 2 the most dont really know what to do with that one.
With draft one around 56 seconds maybe have a choir sound or a ahh or ohh sound match the first note of the bass line per 4 bars