Once breh started reciting Takeover, I knew @Ziggiy was gonna Ether him (pun intended )I laughed that the Nas mentions, I said 'Ha. That's so coli of him with his Nas stannin ass. Lol jay lost.'
Once breh started reciting Takeover, I knew @Ziggiy was gonna Ether him (pun intended )I laughed that the Nas mentions, I said 'Ha. That's so coli of him with his Nas stannin ass. Lol jay lost.'
Acting lacks fluidity.Not bad.
Has potential for sure.
Acting lacks fluidity.
Some parts come off as contrived and mechanical.
Some plot development is needed.
I'll check for the next ep, tho.
Again.
this is big...
With some sharpening of some elements, I think you might really have something here.
Tah! I got that Black Panther tee too!
this was cool tho. real positive.
dropped my favorite Chris Rock line too!
money need to get up off that air mattress tho!
Cut some of the conversations down a bit but major props to you
Good stuff. Too long though. Cut this joint in half and work on your camera filming and lighting and you got something. I can tell you spent time on the writing and it actually shows. But the bad camera work kinda throws everything off.
Episode 1 is in the first post on page 1 homieHow do I get episode one? I will donate to support the rest of the season