What I want...is a camera in Ray's head to view his thoughts...
You can tell by his body language that he is in that "Realizing I done fukked up mode"...
I can imagine him in the elevator like : "get up"
Her:
Ray: Get up the door is about to open
Her:
Ray: bytch YOU BETTER GET YOUR fukkING ASS UP RIGHT NOW I DIDNT EVEN HIT YOU THAT HARD! GET THE fukk UP I'M RAY fukkING RICE YOU BETTER NOT EMBARRASS ME!
Her:
Ray: Fumbling with the pause button on the elevator but his fingers are to big and chunky so he ends up hitting 2 buttons at once and the elevator keeps going..."Man what the fukk"
Her:
Ray: You going to make me drag your ass out here!
Fine I will I will drag your ass!
Her:
Ray: bytch GET THE fukk UP YOU GOING TO COST ME MY FOOTBALL CAREER! I MAKE ALL THE fukkING MONEY YOU GOING TO RUIN US GET THE fukk UP!
I SWEAR IF YOU DON'T...
(Ding. Door opens )
Ray :
Her:
Ray: Carries her out the elevator
Her:
Random white dude: Hey, hey buddy you need some help...oh gosh what happened here..oh man something happen in the elevator...you should sue buddy they got camera's everywhere here
Ray :
Her: Turns head slightly to the left and moans...