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The Official Film Room Screenplay Feedback Thread
- Thread starter Drew Wonder
- Start date
MenacingMonk
Tranquilo
I'll probably just post the Avatar script here. It's nothing original since it's how I would start the third series of the saga. I only did 8-10 pages anyway.
@ you nikkas forgetting to tag me even though I don't write screenplayssatireprod
Superstar
You never know bro, might have something on your hands
okgoodnotgreat
Pro
for the mention. Salute, breh. Let's win. Once I get some stuff done, I'm def posting and submitting some pieces.
satireprod
Superstar
Dopeness what kind of genre do you normally write?
Once I get some stuff done, I'm def posting and submitting some pieces.
Drew Wonder
Superstar
Cool, gonna add you to the script recipients. But also let me know if you have any material you wanna get read
okgoodnotgreat
Pro
I'm everywhere with my genres, which is probably my issue. I'm working on a call center comedy now (something akin to the British TV show "Peep Show" in terms of dry humor) but I'm also storyboarding ideas for Anime show idea and a science-fiction-y/superhero show. Should I stick to one genre and master it or float between a few and see which ones work the best? I'm rather new, so any advice/criticism is good advice/criticism to me.
satireprod
Superstar
"They" suggest you stay in one genre so you can show your expertise in a field and that way prospective studios can know your voice, but to be honest a lot of creative's don't really think like that. Now there may one genre you gravitate toward naturally but you never know what will pop so you cant limit your options too early
MenacingMonk
Tranquilo
All right, I'ma start it off. Here's my Avatar spin off. It's only 10 pages, obviously not done. If you never watched Avatar/Korra, they're animation shows that focus on the 4 elements of water, air, fire, and earth. Each element has its own tribe where they can learn bending, which means they manipulate these elements in different ways. Only the Avatar can learn all 4.
EDIT: How come the link doesn't embed on here? I remember it used to do it.
EDIT: How come the link doesn't embed on here? I remember it used to do it.
Drew Wonder
Superstar
MenacingMonk
Tranquilo
Hold up bruh, you're up during week 2 and we start Sunday.
It ain't complete anyway. Figured it wouldn't be a stretch to peep.
satireprod
Superstar
@Drew Wonder are you watermarking your script for Sunday?
Drew Wonder
Superstar
Nah, I copyrighted it and also registered it with the WGA. You think I should get it watermarked too though?
satireprod
Superstar
I normally do whenever I'm sending it to a producer/actor,etc (Watermark either their name on it or mine) but that might just be more of a habit thing as when I started out I would get it sent that way