A lot of the black written/created comics are/were like that. That's why I always laughed when people would say certain characters seem like they were written by white guys tryna write black.I'm surprised that Miles Morales What If mini's last issue was written by a black guy.
Too many cringe-worthy urban dictionairy "slang".
"By Odin's fade"
"Sup, Nephew?"
"Word? Bet!"
I know it's hard to convey accents/dialect and personality in dialog, but it is horrible a lot of times..no matter who's writing.