Essential The Official Coli Horror Film Thread: Discussion, Recommendations And Murder.

[Neuromancer]

Gave me Southbound vibes heavy. Definitely has a strong visual feel for something that didn't hammer us with descriptors. My one constructive idea would be for the creature to get away, so that Carl only gets a glimpse of it running away in the shadows and distance...only because I feel like you could keep this story going and that threat would stay just outside of view at the conclusion of this juncture.

Good idea.

 

[MartyMcFly]

....No one likes the movie except for me

hey lol you're not alone. the two hosts of the witching hour like it. One of them in particular loves it. I felt about this the same way I feel about the new Suspira. It's gorgeous, it's technically well done, but just feels so distant and cold and more form over function.

You from queens so of course you like Mr. Cheeks.

nikka how many times have I told you about your Queens slander

 

[Neuromancer]

hey lol you're not alone. the two hosts of the witching hour like it. One of them in particular loves it. I felt about this the same way I feel about the new Suspira. It's gorgeous, it's technically well done, but just feels so distant and cold and more form over function.



nikka how many times have I told you about your Queens slander

That's @BXKingPin82 not me.

 

[MartyMcFly]

That's @BXKingPin82 not me.

oh I know. He's on thin ice

 

[Neuromancer]

oh I know. He's on thin ice

I'm just saying she likes Mr. Cheeks. I'm a Lost Boyz fan myself and you know Nas>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> except Sean Price.

 

[MartyMcFly]

I'm just saying she likes Mr. Cheeks. I'm a Lost Boyz fan myself and you know Nas>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> except Sean Price.

AYE! I love Nas too but don't slander Sean P! fukk is going on here

 

[Jello Biafra]

Just downloaded EXTRA ORDINARY the other day but haven't gotten around to watching it yet.

 

[morris]

The road was pitch black. Carl could barely see in front of his high beams. He'd drove as fast as the limit would allow him. He wish he could drive faster, but didn't want to alert the local authorities, he had heard stories of police in sundown towns. He could see the highway up ahead and almost sighed with relief until he heard the whirring of klaxon's. He stopped the car and pulled over to the side of the road and said a silent prayer that he would come out of this alive.


"Driver step out of the vehicle." Carl got out of the car and saw the officer pointing the gun.


"Step this way." The officer motioned and as soon as Carl go into range of him. The office opened fire. Carl was frozen for a second he felt a hand touch his shoulder.


"Good thing we saw you when we did or that thing would have gotten you." The officer pointed to the car and in the back seat was something that looked like a goat with human legs.


"We try to have everyone inside by sundown since, well stuff like this goes out at night."


The officers carted the body away and Carl got back in his car. The left rear glass was shattered. The officer leaned down and handed him a card. "There's an auto repair shop next town over tell 'em Clint sent ya. Don't worry, They're friendly folk. Drive safe now."


And with that the police left and Carl continued on his way, sure to never come this way again and invest in a fire arm.

@Nicole0416 @storyteller @morris @MartyMcFly @Jello Biafra @BXKingPin82 @cac poster. New story just finished at work. Thoughts.

the prose is good. is this oart of a longer story? if meant to be short, you can add a bit nore description. Maybe the air being cold or humid, the road bumpy or the the sound if the tires. or you can change the ending to something else.

But otherwise i liked it. I read it until the end

 

[Nicole0416_718_929_646212]

You from queens so of course you like Mr. Cheeks.

....

 

[Nicole0416_718_929_646212]

@Daredevil I didn't get a chance to read your horror short yet, but I'll read it through tonight. Despite the Queens borough slander.

 

[Nicole0416_718_929_646212]

I'm just saying she likes Mr. Cheeks. I'm a Lost Boyz fan myself and you know Nas>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> except Sean Price.

Quiet, you. I never really listened to the Lost Boyz. Don’t get cocky bc we let Brooklyn borrow that rap crown right now. Y’all caught this rap wave for the past few years and think you’re running things. No Queens reckless talk- we turn dreams into nightmares on this side

 

[Neuromancer]

Quiet, you. I never really listened to the Lost Boyz. Don’t get cocky bc we let Brooklyn borrow that rap crown right now. Y’all caught this rap wave for the past few years and think you’re running things. No Queens reckless talk- we turn dreams into nightmares on this side

Nas my favorite living rapper.

 

[Neuromancer]

the prose is good. is this oart of a longer story? if meant to be short, you can add a bit nore description. Maybe the air being cold or humid, the road bumpy or the the sound if the tires. or you can change the ending to something else.

But otherwise i liked it. I read it until the end

I just wrote it as an exercise. To test my self. Idk what to do with it.

 

[morris]

I just wrote it as an exercise. To test my self. Idk what to do with it.

write another

then another

 

[Flex Grossman]

....No one likes the movie except for me

I liked it