Rate & critique my new EP demo ----> NoDotWon x Piris Reis (@nahnah) - "NoDotted Lines"
- Thread starter FruitOfTheVale
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Don't sleep on this fire brought to you by 
FIRE
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
Bruh...
"Subtle tints when I roll by
Sun in the cold sky, crumbs on the floor mine
Yup, the type of hunger make the soul cry
guns for the gold mine, my lung cough is so grime...
playing passion for the purse
prayers, fasting in that church, flower caskets sound in works (they lurk!)
Quiet cowards line that dirt
Power heightens all that worth, ironed out to where it hurts...
(It's go time) Well-versed in my Chanel, clientele
Peak at random, minors fail to see the chances, blind gazelles
With the cannon might as well feed the chamber
Tight as hell, see the anger working bones in my fangaz...
'Cause violent thoughts,
Console, unfold what the trauma brought
Look, we outta options
No holds, scope domes when they outta pocket"
IDK if I even transcribed this all the way right but this shyt right here...
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KravenMorehead™
Barrel Brothers.®
y'all both flowin 
Bruh...
"Subtle tints when I roll by
Sun in the cold sky, crumbs on the flow line
Yup, the type of hunger make the soul cry
guns for the gold mine, my lung coughin soul grime...
playing passion for the purse
prayers, fasting in that church, flower caskets sound in works (they lurk!)
Quiet cowards line that dirt
Power heightens all that worth, iron douse em where it hurts...
(It's go time for yo shine) Well-versed in my channel, clientele
Peak at random, minors fail to see the chances, blind gazelles
With the cannon might as well feed the chamber
Tired as hell, see the anger working bones in my fangaz...
'Cause violent thoughts,
Console, unfold what the trauma brought
Look, we outta options
No holds, scope domes when they outta pocket"
IDK if I even transcribed this all the way right but this shyt right here...
Man I love yall. Fixed for accuracy lol I like what you heard tho. Thank for the feature. Yo shyt is flames family
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
The real verse even colder
The whole song flames all the way around
The feedback on this project been amazing, a ton of great suggestions that I'm definitely taking into account before its finalized.
Yo this shyt is SUPER dope fam. Keep going.
Fred.
this is heat breh.
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
KravenMorehead™
Barrel Brothers.®
I enjoy the vibe of your records. I don't like to immediately have an opinion, so I had to let it sit.
I found myself wanting a "banger" to shake things up, cause the melancholy vibe makes it so I can't get everything I want from the record so I gotta play other shyt, if that makes sense. But that's a personal thing, and I respect you doing you....
I was happy as fukk when I heard "You know who you are" playing.
I found myself wanting a "banger" to shake things up, cause the melancholy vibe makes it so I can't get everything I want from the record so I gotta play other shyt, if that makes sense. But that's a personal thing, and I respect you doing you....
I was happy as fukk when I heard "You know who you are" playing.
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
I enjoy the vibe of your records. I don't like to immediately have an opinion, so I had to let it sit.
I found myself wanting a "banger" to shake things up, cause the melancholy vibe makes it so I can't get everything I want from the record so I gotta play other shyt, if that makes sense. But that's a personal thing, and I respect you doing you....
I was happy as fukk when I heard "You know who you are" playing.
Appreciate that you doubled back
I feel you on the banger comment, I see "Payback" filling that role on this record once the hook and the feature verse come together.
As a whole though this project is definitely on the pensive side of things... outside of "Stop The Show" it's been a minute since I made a lighthearted record lol. My next project might tip the scale back the other direction, this quarantine life got a nikka dreaming about hitting up the next function with no fukks given
KravenMorehead™
Barrel Brothers.®
Appreciate that you doubled back
I feel you on the banger comment, I see "Payback" filling that role on this record once the hook and the feature verse come together.
As a whole though this project is definitely on the pensive side of things... outside of "Stop The Show" it's been a minute since I made a lighthearted record lol. My next project might tip the scale back the other direction, this quarantine life got a nikka dreaming about hitting up the next function with no fukks given
