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SymbolicOne09

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really digging the first track. drums are slamming. I could hear some crisp vocals over this for sure. the top popping, potato chip crunching is interesting too... but maybe just a little too high in the mix... also... if you had like a rverse snare or cymbal then DROPPED out the break right before or during the hook... the part around 1:43ish... i think it needs something like maybe just kicks or just snares or switch the snare to a clap... feels like the mood changes but the drums remian. just a thought

the second one doesnt seem to flow tho, almost like the trappy digital hihats dont match at all the the sampling. just my opinion. btw what is your avatar? the LOR? always makes me think lord of the rings
Many thanks on the feed back , LOR stands for Legion of Rebals, were a group of producers, artist and photographers based out of Dc, Maryland and Virginia. Were trying to get all are ducks in a row but where gonna have alot of content dropping this year.
 

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couple new flips:
more trappy 50 bpm

lofi, loops, boombap 85bpm i believe


yo that first track is dope as hell...i love it. i'm a total sucker for that type of shyt and you do it very well, man. i'm listening on some headphones i'm not used to, so maybe it's that...but i think if you cleaned out the low-end some more for the bass/808s, it would really open up and be :blessed: status.

the second one - the drums sound super-saturated and compressed, i could live with that on its own but adding the extra over-powering vinyl/tape sound/whatever you wanna call it... just pulling that back would make the track stronger. don't get me wrong, i like the beat, i just think the mix is out of wack. to me, it sounds like it's overshooting the "dirty, lo-fi" type of stuff and hitting the messy zone of things.
 

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I can't make threads but I'm looking for producers "neo soul hip hop and house" serious inquiries only.

Hit the pm. Peace.
 

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Hey
After some time we "released" another beat and would be cool if we could get some feedback on it

"I Just Wanna Fly" with hook by Fudge

TheAtomicBeats
This is nice bro. You're gonna easily sell this . You might wanna adjust the bass drum a little . Give it more bottom. Hook is produced well. This is a lay up of a pop song. I hope your team is shopping this to any pop act they can find
 
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