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SymbolicOne09

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for the geminis out there. Needs more drum breaks like all my tracks do:mjcry: somebody teach me the drum knowledge
 

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Lil chop and flip #mondaylife :win:

really digging the first track. drums are slamming. I could hear some crisp vocals over this for sure. the top popping, potato chip crunching is interesting too... but maybe just a little too high in the mix... also... if you had like a rverse snare or cymbal then DROPPED out the break right before or during the hook... the part around 1:43ish... i think it needs something like maybe just kicks or just snares or switch the snare to a clap... feels like the mood changes but the drums remian. just a thought

the second one doesnt seem to flow tho, almost like the trappy digital hihats dont match at all the the sampling. just my opinion. btw what is your avatar? the LOR? always makes me think lord of the rings
 
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