So I watched the first episode (where the terrorist wanted the prime minister to fukk a pig on live TV in exchange for the princess) and while it was entertaining and thought provoking, I had some major issues with the writing so I want to get a flavor for if those issues persist or if it gets better.
First issue is that the national security team didn't seem believable with the actions they were taken. The ploy to use an actor to fake it had minimal upside and tremendous downside. The only upside was the PM wouldn't actually have to fukk a pig. The public would still have to think he fukked a pig, however. Maybe you could let his wife in on it too, but only a very small number of people could know you keep the secret safe. The downside was huge: the loss of life to the princess simply because of your treachery. Many in the public may have been ok with not complying with terrorist leading to her death, but for her to die because you failed to trick a technically savvy terrorist wouldn't go over as well. My next issue with that security team was them not surrounding the building where they thought the terrorist was and allowing a reporter to just sneak in. That was way too sloppy for such a high profile operation. Her running was dumb too, and her surviving the shots when she did run was lame. Finally, my biggest issue is with the lack of contingency planning. As soon as they got the video they should've been devising a plan for if they were to comply and one for if they chose not to comply. So when 4pm came, if they weren't complying, they'd get on air with a speech explaining that they will not negotiate with terrorist because today they may demand a lewd act tomorrow they may demand something worse, and this is something the U.K. cannot tolerate, yadda yadda yadda. Now it's possible that this plan was done offscreen and never mentioned cuz they didn't use it, but I doubt it cuz they didn't have a narrative ready for the comply option. All they did was read a short message saying keeping the video was illegal. Gotta believe a real strategy team would've read a carefully manicured statement before the act in order to sway the public. Such a statement might convey that the PM is complying in hopes that this embarrassment for himself and the government may save the beloved princess's life. And while he is choosing to comply, there is no requirement that UK citizens actually watch the broadcast. So he'd play to their civic pride and the fact that most people despise terrorism and ask them to turn off their televisions, not to tweet about it and not give this terrorist any of the attention it deserves. Obviously, everyone wouldn't oblige, but many would and it would've created a realistic and interesting dialogue amongst those public gatherings at the hospital and the bar.
My final issue is with the release of her 30 minutes prior and no one noticing with all the cameras in that city. Sure, they general public may have been glued to their television sets (tho I don't know if that was necessarily be the case a full 30 minutes prior), but with such a big active kidnapping, you'd think they'd have "all hands on deck" monitoring those cameras. Wherever she first comes up on camera (if she was released after the act as they thought she'd be) is where they send the police to start looking for the perp. Her being out in the open for a full 30 minutes seems unreal.
Sorry for the long winded post, but before I start to go through 4 seasons of this, I wanna determine if the writing tightens up or not.