- reformat ASAP. use lines that stretch across the entire page for each section instead of underlining. you can look up how to do this, just type "---" (three dashes) or "===" (three equals) and hit enter. also switch out the default bullet point format, people notice that and it looks like you haven't put in enough effort
- generally, you need to be more specific in your skillset. "statistical models, econometrics, matrix alegbra" could be any number of things. mention the exact models or procedures, the more complicated the better
- on the same note, software skills are usually very important to employers. "1+ year" with Excel makes you sound underqualified. weren't you using it throughout high school? I would separate the Excel/Access/R stuff to a "Skills" section. list the exact software functions that you are familar with like "Excel - lookup functions, data management & filtering, pivot tables" "R - multivariate regression, ... , etc."
- its good to include work experience, but I would seriously trim that section, most of it would be irrelevant to an analyst role
good luck - not to discourage you but you are definitely going to need internship experience before breaking into financial analysis. either take a paid internship or make sure people get hired out of the program. DO NOT WORK FOR FREE