The Coli's Screenwriting/Filmmaking Thread [Share tips, etc]

Mr. McDowell

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So I am finally self-publishing my book this year. I originally wrote it as a screenplay, then had several prodco's tell me it's too big (it spans several films/books). Needs to be IP first. So now I am getting it professionally edited. I actually believe adapting screenplays from novels is easier than the reverse. The reason why, the entire story is already developed, now you just need to write based on what would allow your story to remain as close to the book without bogging people down. Remember emotion in a screenplay will be more often than not conveyed by the direction and the acting.

When I wrote my book a little over a year ago, it actually improved my screenplay significantly, because a lot of the smaller character motivations had room to breathe. It wasn't easy, but I came out of it, understanding why I originally felt this was a book in the first place. I give props to anyone who finishes novels and screenplays. As mentioned just above me, it takes discipline. Plus, no one really respects writers [professionally] in Hollywood, because they are easily replaceable and faceless as opposed to an A-list actor/director.
 

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Without being able to read it, I'll just give you some advice I've had before:

Unless it's incredibly important or incredibly funny, you probably want to find a way to cut down 9 pages of dialogue down a little.

Also, read it through, and around the end of the first page or into the second - is there a place/line of dialogue you can use to start the scene? Find a line there and delete everything above it. Here's just a shytty example.

1.Yo

2. What's up?

1. Chillin'. 'Bout to go home and play 2k.

2. You're not gonna clean the grill?

1. I'm clocking off, you clean it.

2. What you been doing all day?

1. Binge watching Stranger Things.

2. So instead of cleaning the grill you've been hanging out in the upside down all day?


If that was the start of your scene, you could x out everything above the bolded.

Again, shytty example, but just a way to show how you could trim the fat. I try to do it too after a scene/script is done.
Word. I've learned that shyt. Consolidate
 

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Started back on my movie. Did a few pages; Up to 38. Realized how the hell am I gonna chunk up act 2 and finish it off. Decided to write a quick outline and I just started flowing. Hopefully these ideas are keepers and I can get it up to 100 pages.
 
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