dangerranger
All Star
Nah not at the moment. I’ll look out for your PM.
The Coli's Screenwriting/Filmmaking Thread [Share tips, etc]
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MenacingMonk
Tranquilo
I have the script up if anyone can spare some time to check it. Have one reader, but more won’t hurt with feedback. 
Again, I’ll offer my time to read your script if you have one needing feed.
Again, I’ll offer my time to read your script if you have one needing feed.
I have the script up if anyone can spare some time to check it. Have one reader, but more won’t hurt with feedback.
Again, I’ll offer my time to read your script if you have one needing feed.
I'll take a spin reading it. I've done some novel reading/editing for other members on here before
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
I have the script up if anyone can spare some time to check it. Have one reader, but more won’t hurt with feedback.
Again, I’ll offer my time to read your script if you have one needing feed.
pm me
MenacingMonk
Tranquilo
Hey everyone, hope your writing is improving. I just got feedback from a horror contest I entered. They said it was good but the dialogue was an issue and act 3 needed “story beats.”
I had 3/4 people read it and none mentioned these. I think my dialogue was fine, but I can see some parts where it might sound “fake.” Said I needed more “twists and turns.”
I actually redid the the script and think it’s much better. I’m hoping the next place I submit it to prefers it.
I had 3/4 people read it and none mentioned these. I think my dialogue was fine, but I can see some parts where it might sound “fake.” Said I needed more “twists and turns.”
I actually redid the the script and think it’s much better. I’m hoping the next place I submit it to prefers it.
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FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
Dope is it the same one I read a while back?
MenacingMonk
Tranquilo
FruitOfTheVale
Superstar
Send me the new version when you have a chance, I'm interested to see the changes
@the elastic here's the thread you're looking for
Thanks
