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[BeetAficionado]

#zoneout

some chill shyt for driving out late

 

[Jon Oh!]

sound more crazy dope moves that i just busts, perhaps underground single of the year if promo'd correcty

 

[BasedHead]

• nikka named jason had cheddar/
• shyt got took by nikkas wearing sweaters/
• flat caps, Flat Fronts, Marck jacobes/
• holding big gats immitating baby face Nelson/
• now he in a pseudocoma/ dreaming of owning multiple hummers/
• sitting on a plantation, girl on his arms, she asian/
• other on the other arm caucasian/
• no c00n though he also got a afrocentric haitian/
• multiple yearly vacations in multiple locations/
• no worries about starvation, frustrations only elations/
• then he remembers he in a coma/
• picturing momma crying to the coroner/
• asking god why them nikkas had him cornered/
• putting gats in his mouth like they the FBI/
• and he Khalid Sheikh Mohammed/

shyts ass first rap i;ve ever written so coli MC's give a young nikka rhyming tips, need to polish my spitting game.
when nikkas ask me to spit a verse i usually just spit an old jadakiss verse but i dont wanna do that anymore gotta come up with my own.

 

[doublenegative]

not even remotely fukking around

 

[Bald Head Ba$tard]

The snippets to my upcoming debut beat-tape dropping tomorrow for free. It's titled #59Weeks.

 

[pifftannen]

tracks from a mixtape i put together, been releasing it joint by joint for the last few weeks, gonna be in here today commenting on yalls joints

 

[pifftannen]

sound more crazy dope moves that i just busts, perhaps underground single of the year if promo'd correcty

not bad, the beginning flow on this reminded me of nelly a little. i think what this would need most is a cleaner mix and mabe a bassline for the beat. the beat itself is cool, your flow is also on point as well, but a good mix of this would make it pretty buttery.

 

[pifftannen]

not even remotely fukking around

yo i didnt think i was going to dig this at first TBH but i definitely like it. do you see rappers on it? i feel like you got a dark banger right here man. with all the vocal samples you used, i was sad to not hear the end of the one from menace II society where he made dude order his food while he was robbing him

 

[pifftannen]

The snippets to my upcoming debut beat-tape dropping tomorrow for free. It's titled #59Weeks.

first two had me like

the fifth one had me like waiting for the beat to drop, i hope the drop on that joint is filthy. same with the 6th joint.

digging the lo fi feel, kinda reminds me of like some SGP X madlib in a weird way.

the second to last joint was my least favorite, but i look forward to hearing these beats in their entireties

 

[pifftannen]

I tried to do neo-soul on this

neo-soul aint really my thing, but it was a cool attempt, that other beat tho

but for that one, i feel like, that intro sample was mad fire, but the drop in after that wasnt as hard as i'd have liked ideally (kinda gives me that ali bomaye feel on the intro and drop). im not sure if its the selection of what sample is used for the loop, but maybe when the hard kick comes in at :40, the 'let me down gently' part would come in with it, that might make it sound more at the drop.

 

[Bald Head Ba$tard]

59 Weeks In Chi

Beat-Tape

 

[92_Bricks]

59 Weeks In Chi

Beat-Tape

this sounds weird to me, I dont know about acid tho..

 

[jaylav_]

• nikka named jason had cheddar/
• shyt got took by nikkas wearing sweaters/
• flat caps, Flat Fronts, Marck jacobes/
• holding big gats immitating baby face Nelson/
• now he in a pseudocoma/ dreaming of owning multiple hummers/
• sitting on a plantation, girl on his arms, she asian/
• other on the other arm caucasian/
• no c00n though he also got a afrocentric haitian/
• multiple yearly vacations in multiple locations/
• no worries about starvation, frustrations only elations/
• then he remembers he in a coma/
• picturing momma crying to the coroner/
• asking god why them nikkas had him cornered/
• putting gats in his mouth like they the FBI/
• and he Khalid Sheikh Mohammed/

shyts ass first rap i;ve ever written so coli MC's give a young nikka rhyming tips, need to polish my spitting game.
when nikkas ask me to spit a verse i usually just spit an old jadakiss verse but i dont wanna do that anymore gotta come up with my own.

I Spit that quick..... with the right flow that word play is pretty tight

 

[jaylav_]

I'm Jay... I go first, peep this cypher I did with my boy + 2 homies. I thought its pretty tight... let me know your thoughts @ anybody

 

[ryshy]

Dropped a new ep called Synthesia today

Check it out its on my SC, heres a "standout" track



Bangersss. Repost if you like im trying to get some attention to this project