Essential Official post your piff for critique/comments/stunting thread

[NVious]

I like the feel. It's smooth. Simple loop but effective. The little variations you make such as the stutters, drops and phaser keeps it fresh. I like the bassline but it gets a bit repetitive. I would say vary the bassline at some point. Instead of only 2 bars, maybe do 4 and an interesting progression. Because the rest of the beat is transitioning you could make the hook even more dynamic with an added progession of the bassline.

Appreciate the constructive criticism. That's exactly the type of feedback that I was looking for. Thank you.

 

[Mashal88]

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[ba'al]

Sample for anybody that wants to flip it too

 

[wizworld]

If you disliked this song before, you will probably like this remix

 

[Timothy Marley]

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

 

[nonexist]

Somasu

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[nonexist]

Considering I won’t be making another song for a very long time (or ever again) - here are over 100 of my songs.

Somasu

 

[LOST IN THE SAUCE]

 

[InterestedNow]

I can't really sing, but please let the girls know this song exists:

 

[Timothy Marley]

“Cherry Wine” by Timothy Marley out now on all streaming platforms

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

workin on it

 

[Timothy Marley]

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

Soul beat

 

[Don Juan]