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Been going through this thread lately and we really got some talented brehs on this site. Should definitely be more collaboration. I play bass too would love to play bass over some of what I’m hearing from y’all. As a matter of fact I need to post some of my newer shyt it’s been a minute.
 

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Finally made some new beats after months of not feeling inspired.




The second one I got a little too obsessed with trying to hit that 90s Pete Rock sound, ended up sounding like a generic knock off in the end.
 

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He sister asked me to make something Nina Simone, so here we have it. All feedback good/bad is welcome.

I like the feel. It's smooth. Simple loop but effective. The little variations you make such as the stutters, drops and phaser keeps it fresh. I like the bassline but it gets a bit repetitive. I would say vary the bassline at some point. Instead of only 2 bars, maybe do 4 and an interesting progression. Because the rest of the beat is transitioning you could make the hook even more dynamic with an added progession of the bassline.
 
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