We criticize rappers on this board everyday. People criticize Em for his white trash content. Andre 3000 for his lack of solo albums. Ghostface for his lack of commercial success. Why do you guys get so weird when a legit MUSIC (or music writing) criticism is leveled against Jay-Z?
Exactly. You have to be either a delusional camel nut-gargler or have very poor attention to detail to not concede that Jay Z's lyrical myopia is a very valid knock on him. Music is expression of self and life, and often of shared common experience. The most powerful and enduring music has always been a reflection of life and times of the people, whether you're talking about Curtis Mayfield, Bob Marley, Bob Dylan or whoever. John Lennon, Prince, Jimi Hendrix, pick a name, didn't just write songs about themselves. If they did, their music wouldn't have been as revered. Hip-hop is more of an organic expression of the people who constitute the culture moreso than maybe any other major genre of music.
Jay Z is great at giving you his own personal experience through his lens. He might even be THE greatest introspective rapper. His problem is he can't step outside himself like every other great rapper can, and when he does it usually falls flat. I see camel stans already making up dumb excuses like "Well he really lived the life so he speaks about what he does," like the first rapper to sell drugs or grow up in poverty. And also, like almost every other street rapper, he does embellish stuff. So he does take artistic license...but it's always about him as usual.
Camel stans are so easy to poke fun at because they literally will not concede that he has ONE single flaw as an artist or a human being. When you raise a valid point about an imperfection in their bactrian father figure, the knives are out, and it's like muscle memory to try and counterattack instead of even considering maybe it's a criticism with legitimacy. And an entirely discography of next to no quality material outside of talking about yourself is a legitimate critique. Maybe not so much for just any old rapper, but for a guy who many say is the GOAT, for sure.
Jay Z suffers from not being profound or poignant, or even just interesting without talking about himself. If he's speaking about poverty, urban decay social and the crack epidemic, it's about how poverty, urban decay, social neglect, and the crack epidemic has affected Jay Z (i.e. blame Reagan for making me a monster, blame Oliver North and Iran contra). If he mentions Rosa Parks, Malcolm X,
Martin Luther King, Fred Hampton, or Frank Lucas, it's only to use them as a prop to pat himself on the back (i.e. I'm representing for the seat where Rosa Parks sat). Everything revolves around himself while he either brags or tries to elicit sympathy from the listener. It always goes back to long-winded inner monologue about how selling drugs 6 decades ago or girls calling him ugly or whatever affected his psychological and emotional state. It's all about fukking him.
I used the example of Ghost's verse on Impossible in a earlier post, where he painted a vivid and powerful picture of the scene of his friend getting shot and killed in front of him. If you asked Jay Z to write a song about a friend getting killed, he would just talk about how it upset him the whole time and you would have no insight to or picture of the situation.