Nah I think the performances are what sold the dialogue especially since all three of the principles said it wasn't the kinda stuff you could say. They made it work. Some of it is ill but there's a lot of meh that just works because of the people and their effort plus he had everything else cracking
of course it's hokey and over the top. it's supposed to me mythic and whimsical.
come on bro look at all these classic bars.
"may the force be with you"
"the force will be with you.. always"
"help me obi wan kenobi... you're my only hope"
"the force is strong with this one"
"i find your lack of faith disturbing"
"sorry about the mess"
"before the dark times... before the empire"
"that's no moon"
"this will soon be a day long remembered..."
"evacuate? in our moment of triumph?"
"who's more foolish, the fool or the fool that follows him"
"escape is not his plan... i must face him alone"
"if there's a bright center to the universe you're on the planet furthest from"
"i sense something... a presence i've not felt since..."
"don't be so proud of this technological terror you've constructed"
"these aren't the droids you're looking for"
"travelling through hyperspace ain't like dusting crops boy"
"the circle is now complete, when i left you i was but the learner now i am the master..."
just heat after heat.