Assess my cover letter, What changes should I make? Would u consider hiring me

[Kamikaze Revy]

Rafters? I found this last night and died laughing. (Y'all think he got the job?)

What do you think?

 

[Kamikaze Revy]

Terrible cover letter. If this isn't a troll thread i pity the restaurant manager that has to schedule shifts around your independent music and art ventures.

Funny how spot on I was with this long before he revealed what his "skills" were and how he was going to change the game for the field he was in.

 

[DrX]

Rafters? I found this last night and died laughing. (Y'all think he got the job?)

hi daisy

actually i haven't been applying lately because ive been working on a few projects and building my brand...i know u said that in a condescending way, but yes i will get a job, simply due to my high level of skill

 

[Rawtid]

That's my Scorpio.