What yall think of this essay I wrote for UT?

[Richard Wright]

It sucks for college based off the first sentence, write another essay talking about how awesome you are

 

[bigDeeOT]

It sucks for college based off the first sentence, write another essay talking about how awesome you are

This was the second essay. In my first essay I write about how awesome I am.

 

[bigDeeOT]

I don't hate myself or hate being black. I love being black. Anyway I'm done here.

 

[Walt]

@Walt

Thanks for tagging me and giving me a chance to read this essay. I thought it was sharp. The voice combined sympathy and aspiration, and the ideas seemed well-researched and were presented with clarity. Overall it was a fascinating take on society, race, and genetics.

 

[Walt]

You should undap me breh breh, I was being facetious. You're either doing some beast trolling or your self-hatred is consuming you. You're young, so hopefully you'll do some productive self-sorting in college and beyond.

 

[bigDeeOT]

You should undap me breh breh, I was being facetious. You're either doing some beast trolling or your self-hatred is consuming you. You're young, so hopefully you'll do some productive self-sorting in college and beyond.

I knew you were from the word "genetics." I dapped you because I support what you said literally.

 

[bigDeeOT]

I don't hate anyone. People like you just say that because it hurts you to actually think critically about your beliefs. To say I hate myself is a good way to excuse yourself out of an intelligent discussion.