what makes a sick rhyme scheme

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when the entire bar rhymes with the next

example...

Outerspace - It Is What It Is - YouTube

this not a complex rhyme scheme

this is what im talking about

What's it all about?
You dudes can't come out the house
Made to many enemies, you runnin' ya mouth
Now you on lock down, sittin' on the couch
Talkin' to cops you need really to cut it out man
Picture Crooked I lovin' a snake, you get robbed for dough
You get shot fo' sho' youknow
That ain't gangsta you son of a bytch
Givin' cops the info they not suppose to know
And they own every block from coast to coast
Tellin' on who ever cock and grows the most
Send a nikka up the river if a snitch is around
You better lock and close ya doors
See I'ma rep my city for ever, yeah
Roll wips on 20's or better
Pointin' many machine guns, semi-auto beretta
And my enemies sweater like gimme the cheddar, yeah
Crooked live illegal as hell
Send a couple kites to my people in jail
Think about this when you readin' your mail
These nikkaz be eager to tell...
 

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to me what makes a sick rhyme scheme is internal rhyming end rhyming and begining rhyming and multi's

the million dollar question is would you prefer a complicated rhyme scheme that really doesnt say much or a simple rhyme scheme that says a lot? You cant really have it both ways.
 
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if you don't compromise the integrity of the lyrics with whatever scheme youre using then its dope. you have some rappers (cory gunz, etc...) who are cool with the patterns but what they are actually saying is 1000% gibberish. a dope delivery and dope lyrics >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rhyme schemes. most people base how they feel about a rapper on delivery and what they're saying, rhyme schemes only matter to an extremely tiny percentage of people. the average fan don't listen for that.


when Canibus first came out he wasn't really crazy with the patterns, yet everybody thought he was the illest rapper since Nas hit.
 

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the million dollar question is would you prefer a complicated rhyme scheme that really doesnt say much or a simple rhyme scheme that says a lot? You cant really have it both ways.
You can have intricate, complex rhyme schemes that say a lot and ou can have simple ones that don't say shyt (see a gang of Lil Wayne songs)
 

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if you don't comprimise the integrity of the lyrics with whatever scheme youre using then its dope. you have some rappers (cory gunz, etc...) who are cool with the patterns but what they are actually saying is 1000% gibberish. a dope delivery and dope lyrics >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rhyme schemes. most people base how they feel about a rapper on delivery and what they're saying, rhyme schemes only matter to an extremely tiny percentage of people. the average fan don't listen for that.


when Canibus first came out he wasn't really crazy with the patterns, yet everybody thought he was the illest rapper since Nas hit.

nah i disagree canibus was sick with the patterns.
 

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You can have intricate, complex rhyme schemes that say a lot and ou can have simple ones that don't say shyt (see a gang of Lil Wayne songs)

Ice Cube is a prime example of completely watering down his style because he chose to switch to multi's. He shoulda stayed with that trusty reliable 1--2--1--2. Like Too Short for example. People dont understand that Nas is doing the reverse; he's dropping the multi's in favor of the 1--2
 
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