breh I always try to be respectful when it comes to criticism, cuz I'm not a hating type of dude. I used to make beats too and was pretty decent (2010-2011) so I know it's difficult but, I'm an emcee at heart so I respect cats who take time to master that aspect of hip-hop.
With your beat, the drums really were holding it back. I don't like to use the r word (repetitive) because so many nikkas get up in arms about that shyt so I try to word it better, but truthfully your beat was a lil repetitive to me, it's just that the sample was so dope the repetition didn't stand out as much. Some louder drums and maybe a lil more bass would have really caused the beat to go harder and sound more progressive imo.
You already know I've listened to your beats since you first started posting and you've improved a lot while maintaining your key sound so it's good to see you continuing to grow. I actually don't even think this is the best beat I've heard from you. I actually think the beat where you flipped the Bayonetta final boss theme was your best track but
But anyways breh...keep grinding
I hear you lol. I had another beat I was gonna use for this but I made this yesterday and was feeling it haha. I have taken all ya'll advice though and changed the volume of the drums and shyt. it does sound better.