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LOS91

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I made the beat and did the first verse let me know if it's decent or wack
 

Headcase

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I've been working on my debut album for a few years now, and I'm finally releasing it October 16th. I'd love to get some feedback on my newest single, "Stay Committed"


And just for reference, here are the previously released singles from the album:

The Funk


and "Revenge of the Boom Bap (ft. Ghost Dog and Tuscon of the 1100 Hunters)
 

ibrokemyneck

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Can you guys give me some tips/guides as a beginner?


try to remake/ cover your favorite track, or one of your favorite tracks. start of by finding the sample they're using or something so you can get close, (you dont have to find out the exact synth, but try and get as close to the drums and tempo and timing as you can. you will learn "holy shyt, how do i make this sound?" and that can make your questions more targeted. you have a long way to go right now.
 

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I know this belongs in TBZ but I just didn't want my Tunnel brehs to miss out on a part of my rapping

If you manage to listen through that first kids verse, I kill it.
 

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Some feedback would be greatly appreciated.

I need help on how to arrange my beats into a full song (hook, verse, bridge, etc).

Any tips?
 
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