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ibrokemyneck
Rookie
Oh man
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
roxxthe96er
Emcee
New mixtape
soundcloud.com/theofficialroxx/sets/fatal-system-error
I really welcome any and all feedback even if it's that I need to quit.
soundcloud.com/theofficialroxx/sets/fatal-system-error
I really welcome any and all feedback even if it's that I need to quit.
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
Hooked up the monitors for this shyt... * grabs popcorn
1. Good intro.. love the beat clarity
2. i felt like the vocals could have come up a little bit for clarity purposes (the disorted adlib/delay made it slightly harder to hear)... just trying to critique somethign tho... beat is fire.
3. Heard this earlier and it is too nice. This one sounds like the vocals might have clipped some (just some distortion that sounded more than on purpose... i'd drop them just slightly like 0.5-1 db., bro i can't mix vocals for shyt, and i'm just being a little picky at the minute). Your theme and lyrics are sick. "run this till i need a prosthetic". The realest compliment I can give you is that you have "the sound" which a lot of dudes don't have that may have more skill than you. I see where you can grow from this and really make a spot for yourself. Vegeta of the rap game. Love that outro to the song.
4. @randakroyd you crazy for this one. he stole the show sorry ROXX. his pan game is so strong. Your vocals are lower in this one, i don't even know if you can compete with the other vocals in the track. This TRACK is HOT af fam. Dylan Raw 's vocals are mixed better than ROXX. It's a refreshing switch ... but lemme give you the hard truth... he needs to go more wild w the flow to stand out cus his voice is vanilla. the ender was such a tease cus i know he's got it.
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6. OK now this is more of my style. Creepy, weird, NOT TOO TRAPPY, vocals are PERFECT. Sound like an UGLY MANE i bet you had that in mind, cus it's spot on. Beat is nasty, I think if i was mixing up the beat to this track I would have ruined it... cus i would have taken this to the cleaners (chop chop chop screw town).
7. good change of pace but not my style... maybe if i was smoking, but i dont smoke so...skip
8. Cool beat, cool flow on this, just different. You know i think at this point you're showing your flexibility and I dig the growing anger/fierceness in the beat. Sounded kinda like a confessional in a way. I like to hear that shyt (bytches and money is cool, but this is how you get followers) Then you come with the "take your bytch if i want to" That's the hot line/ hook. THis track got x10 better at 1:40ish. that's the flow i wanted the whole time. that 16th flow. Good shyt.
I skipped 9 and 10 just sayuing... i gotta share the love to the homie Ran Dakroyd's tape now... but i listned intently through all of that shyt. No disrespect you got talent just trying to say more than "dope, fire" etc...
Also... lets do work... letsruntrack www.soundcloud.com/letsruntrack
roxxthe96er
Emcee
Ayye thanks for all the feedback my dude! I record an mix the shyt at my crib an I'm still pretty new to it so it's hit or miss, but I'mma keep all this in mind! I'mma do my next tape in a studio an get it mixed, ill hit you up when i'm starting wok on thatHooked up the monitors for this shyt... * grabs popcorn
1. Good intro.. love the beat clarity
2. i felt like the vocals could have come up a little bit for clarity purposes (the disorted adlib/delay made it slightly harder to hear)... just trying to critique somethign tho... beat is fire.
3. Heard this earlier and it is too nice. This one sounds like the vocals might have clipped some (just some distortion that sounded more than on purpose... i'd drop them just slightly like 0.5-1 db., bro i can't mix vocals for shyt, and i'm just being a little picky at the minute). Your theme and lyrics are sick. "run this till i need a prosthetic". The realest compliment I can give you is that you have "the sound" which a lot of dudes don't have that may have more skill than you. I see where you can grow from this and really make a spot for yourself. Vegeta of the rap game. Love that outro to the song.
4. @randakroyd you crazy for this one. he stole the show sorry ROXX. his pan game is so strong. Your vocals are lower in this one, i don't even know if you can compete with the other vocals in the track. This TRACK is HOT af fam. Dylan Raw 's vocals are mixed better than ROXX. It's a refreshing switch ... but lemme give you the hard truth... he needs to go more wild w the flow to stand out cus his voice is vanilla. the ender was such a tease cus i know he's got it.
5.
6. OK now this is more of my style. Creepy, weird, NOT TOO TRAPPY, vocals are PERFECT. Sound like an UGLY MANE i bet you had that in mind, cus it's spot on. Beat is nasty, I think if i was mixing up the beat to this track I would have ruined it... cus i would have taken this to the cleaners (chop chop chop screw town).
7. good change of pace but not my style... maybe if i was smoking, but i dont smoke so...skip
8. Cool beat, cool flow on this, just different. You know i think at this point you're showing your flexibility and I dig the growing anger/fierceness in the beat. Sounded kinda like a confessional in a way. I like to hear that shyt (bytches and money is cool, but this is how you get followers) Then you come with the "take your bytch if i want to" That's the hot line/ hook. THis track got x10 better at 1:40ish. that's the flow i wanted the whole time. that 16th flow. Good shyt.
I skipped 9 and 10 just sayuing... i gotta share the love to the homie Ran Dakroyd's tape now... but i listned intently through all of that shyt. No disrespect you got talent just trying to say more than "dope, fire" etc...
Also... lets do work... letsruntrack www.soundcloud.com/letsruntrack
Myrical Lyfe
In the Gutter, of the Tunnel
SymbolicOne09
All Star
Sup ya can i get some feed back on this one? Any advice
ibrokemyneck
Rookie
sneakers&sex
Pro
chimp1 war pigs ep
i think it was from the illmind all sub everything kit
ive only been on youtube for a month now, so I dont really know how to promote on there other than just uploading good music
Myrical Lyfe
In the Gutter, of the Tunnel
Preview of my soon to be released beat. probably finish this up tonight
Track i did yesterday