Essential Official post your piff for critique/comments/stunting thread

[Idaeo]

 

[NYtymes]

 

[roxxthe96er]

Who need art? I'm signle handedly gonna restore the Pen & Pixel feeling

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

Reminds me of No Limit and Cash Money covers.

 

[Kobes Two Jerseys]

Solid.

 

[Kobes Two Jerseys]

Unmixed rough draft.

 

[XII]

@TEKBEATZ @92 Bricks @ibrokemyneck @Pinyapplesuckas @DJ Dope-Needlz @SexJesus @DBR

I need those harsh realities

 

[ibrokemyneck]

@TEKBEATZ @92 Bricks @ibrokemyneck @Pinyapplesuckas @DJ Dope-Needlz @SexJesus @DBR

I need those harsh realities

Aight, couple things i can hear that could set this muther off... around 1:00, wherever that bass comes back in... needs something to give indication it's about to go down again. you could use a long reversed cymbal... or even take that fading sound that was just playing and reverse that. i bet that'd be dope... then bring in some got damn cymbals bro. your hat game is cool but it needs a OH (open hat) or a crash in there (on second listen i hear there is some variation) on the down beats or something to let 'em know you mean business.

beat has good sound qualities to it, but it's very vanilla. I think that's because the melody isn't strong enoguh on it's own for me to hum it later on... it's kind of forgetable. this isn't really 1 thing, but more of a combination of things... for example the 808 sub is "trap" sounding, but not really blowing me away. needs a little more mids presence/saturation. I'd take notes from something like this, more popular, of course you're not aiming for this, but i'll point out some stuff i'd think you could take notes from.

That last part where you've got the distorted pitched snare is my shyt tho



so... i know this track is much different. BUT, that hi hat is panned and yours didnt sound panned( on second listen i hear that it is panned). it has multiple different samples used as the percussion, it's got a SNARE, a CLAP, a RIMSHOT, all used so subtley that you can't really recognize unless you're really listening. Also, these elements all have a lot of hall reverb to open up the whole spacial arrangment. then there are pieces with very little reverb so it's snapping and almost "jumping right out of this sound ocean"


you asked for it

 

[ibrokemyneck]

after listening to both tracks again, i think i need to go to bed i'm exhausted, ha didnt mean to be so critical, it's actually sonically in a good space, maybe some mastering would bring it to life with a tad more atmosphere

 

[Pinyapplesuckas]

@TEKBEATZ @92 Bricks @ibrokemyneck @Pinyapplesuckas @DJ Dope-Needlz @SexJesus @DBR

I need those harsh realities

i like it. if it were my track i'd throw maybe some reverb on the snare so it floats a little like the rest of the track. that alternate snare is kinda loud too...some verb and a slight delay might make that a little smoother without taking its impact away from the track.

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

@TEKBEATZ @92 Bricks @ibrokemyneck @Pinyapplesuckas @DJ Dope-Needlz @SexJesus @DBR

I need those harsh realities

I think it's pretty dope. Yeah, maybe throw some reverb on it. That would fit the spooky vibe i think.
It still feels a bit too empty. Might wanna add some more chords/melodies.

 

[DBR]

@TEKBEATZ @92 Bricks @ibrokemyneck @Pinyapplesuckas @DJ Dope-Needlz @SexJesus @DBR

I need those harsh realities

Nice trap feel with the dr. dree - west coast influence . Overall this sound very dope and mix is seem clean to me .

 

[roxxthe96er]

Had a lil session with my day ones

 

[Eastside Get The Money]

Went crate digging today

 

[Jay Prod]

Just released a short EP. Would mean lot if you guys check it out and let me know what you think.