Essential Official post your piff for critique/comments/stunting thread

[Myrical Lyfe]

Beat is dope breh. I fukks with the sounds and melody on this one.

I felt like it could have been a lil smoother during certain parts, but that's prolly just me.

You came a long way.

And I'm not done yet. End of this year I'm gunna be there

 

[LauderdaleBoss]

And I'm not done yet. End of this year I'm gunna be there

I wouldn't want it any other way breh.

 

[Jon Oh!]

Trying to decide what songs are gonna make the cut, honest opinions please!!!
{I guess voting is cool if you're doing it for the sport...cause the winners always gonna be the same*}
‪#‎FuqThePolls‬~

 

[roxxthe96er]

That fiiiiiiire comin

EDIT: Peep below

 

[roxxthe96er]

2016 we killin em this year

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[DJ Mart-Kos]

That fiiiiiiire comin

EDIT: Peep below

that Wu-Wear cap looks like it's from 1998.

 

[roxxthe96er]

that Wu-Wear cap looks like it's from 1998.

It's older

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

It's older

LOL, 1997?

 

[roxxthe96er]

LOL, 1997?

95/96 it's older than me lol

 

[ibrokemyneck]

new one, the vox sample is crazy as fukk. i had to edit out the real weird parts. sp404sx

 

[ibrokemyneck]

Trying to decide what songs are gonna make the cut, honest opinions please!!!
{I guess voting is cool if you're doing it for the sport...cause the winners always gonna be the same*}
‪#‎FuqThePolls‬~

I think my comment is more about the mix. You've got so many vocal layers and adlibs going at the same time that it is slightly hard to differentiate the focus. Something I woudl try (i'm not the best at mixing vocals, but i do produce) and in a situation like this I feel like you can do a side-chain to your adlibs so when your main vocals are rapping it will turn down the gain on the non-essentials. It COULD be how i'm listening to it, but it also might be something you can't hear as you may be focused on how legit does it sound. it sounds amazing sonically, but i'm losing your lyrics message because of that. keep it up bro

 

[DJ Mart-Kos]

new one, the vox sample is crazy as fukk. i had to edit out the real weird parts. sp404sx

that vintage sound

 

[Lewis Carpenter]

I'm a rapper out of Norfolk, Va. I go by Lewis Carpenter. Please give my first track a listen, if you like, follow. If you want to make a collab message me. soundcloud.com/Lewis_Carpenter. If you follow me I'll give your tracks a listen and follow back.

 

[Lewis Carpenter]

I think my comment is more about the mix. You've got so many vocal layers and adlibs going at the same time that it is slightly hard to differentiate the focus. Something I woudl try (i'm not the best at mixing vocals, but i do produce) and in a situation like this I feel like you can do a side-chain to your adlibs so when your main vocals are rapping it will turn down the gain on the non-essentials. It COULD be how i'm listening to it, but it also might be something you can't hear as you may be focused on how legit does it sound. it sounds amazing sonically, but i'm losing your lyrics message because of that. keep it up bro

I gave you a follow on Soundcloud, your music is dope. Give me a follow back so we can tali.

 

[Jimmy ValenTime]

this is my next single like some feedback from the coli congregation