|OFFICIAL COLI KANYE WEST "YEEZUS" ALBUM REVIEW|(A-)

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How u gonna give a God an A-

Album is a A+:blessed:

AOTY

Now give him his damn Massage
 

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What I dont get is; is this suppose to make me want to listen?

All I made out is; Kanye's a genius, this album is different

I don't see how it is near perfect, from your review

Mind you, I haven't heard the album at all @WatergunTalk
 
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not to trying to hate on a young scribe's hustle, but this review is pretty poor. some of the word choice is :laff: status.

which, ironically, serves as the subservient to Kanye's "no promo" campaign

don't expect none of that on "Yeezus" neither

but picks a hackneyed and regurgitated subject to angst about

he stumbles and trips over a crack in the pavement (or slams his head on a pole), then relegating to what he says in a song or does on camera as token for his contradictions.

piques an interest in detractors and admirers equally.

:what:

how do you pique an interest? you should have wrote:

"piques the interest of detractors and admirers alike."

you should have had someone edit this before posting it.
 

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not to trying to hate on a young scribe's hustle, but this review is pretty poor. some of the word choice is :laff: status.











:what:

how do you pique an interest? you should have wrote:

"piques the interest of detractors and admirers alike."

you should have had someone edit this before posting it.

That was an immaculate article, fukk you talking about :birdman: Unless you talking about grammatical errors, sure, but don't shyt on my writing ability :ufdup:

I didn't even proofread it, just wrote it up in about an hour :birdman:
 
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That was an immaculate article, fukk you talking about :birdman: Unless you talking about grammatical errors, sure, but don't shyt on my writing ability :ufdup:

I didn't even proofread it, just wrote it up in about an hour :birdman:

yes, there were problems with the grammar, but i'm talking about syntax.

explain to me what the fukk:

which, ironically, serves as the subservient to Kanye's "no promo" campaign

this means. "the subservient"?

:heh:
 

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yes, there were problems with the grammar, but i'm talking about syntax.

explain to me what the fukk:



this means. "the subservient"?

:heh:

The media attention fell in line with the no promo/no media thing. They basically played into his hands. That's just how I thought it up though :ld:

Syntax & grammar is trivial for the most part in this situation anyway, it's all about the craft
 
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The media attention fell in line with the no promo/no media thing. They basically played into his hands. That's just how I thought it up though :ld:

Syntax & grammar is trivial for the most part in this situation anyway, it's all about the craft

:laff:

for a review to be taken seriously, in your mind, grammar and syntax are meaningless.

:laff:
 
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