New! Admiral Crumple - You're more of a Hooker than a Singer - Music Video on WorldstarHipHop!!!!!

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Thank you Triple agent, I always dealt with you.

Alot of ppl said that about my adlibs. They are intentional and a bit off when I do them because I feel it's the art of my vocal production. I have little intricacies and harmonies within.

I did do a joint per request with NO adlibs on any of the verses. Only the chorus. The person who asked for it loved it.

It's below please listen to it on quality speakers/headphones and let me know what you think.

I may do a no adlib straight hip hop track for the heads on a Premier beat.

Here's the no adlib joint


Much easier to understand at poins and to listen to. The hook is better than average because they aren't way off. A producer/engineer to get you to perform your best could go a long way.
 

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I made a pro healthy relationship song. I'm credible for it. I speak from experience. I'm 42 have been in a 5 and 3 year relationship and have never cheated.

Is this supposed to be some kind of flex? You're telling on yourself... 42 years old and been single 66% of your adult life!

Probably because you look like you got that progeria disease, lookin like a terminally ill middle aged white man in 4XL hoodies

This you fam?

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Now you're online bytchin coz people are talkin about your girl when you're the one who dragged her outta bed and put her in your video before she even ran a hairbrush through that hedgerow of a hairdo.

Do better bro before you lose that bytch.. truth be told, you probably already have if this video is anything to go by.. I mean, look at this part here..



She bends over in front of you twerkin and you're stood there like a blind man waiting for the lights to change. The fukk you doin? All you can bring yourself to do is rub her back... carry on like this and boy, you'll be rubbing her back while she's in hospital giving birth to another man's baby.

As for the music? Your whole style is some retarded, very poorly executed pastiche of early Cage Kennylz.... from the delivery, the style.. Everything about it is unoriginal and comes across false.

Respectfully.
 

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Your hook is kind of buried.

Essentially, the heart and soul of the vocals is the hook. The best songs have a hook that is an earworm that sticks with you.

Ideally the song switches gears between the verses and the hook. A bridge is also helpful because it's another change within the song.

Everything was pretty average. Beat was fine. Delivery was clear but a little low energy. I'd like to see more surprises lyrically.

Cool. I'll look into that. I'm always learning.
 

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No disrespect but the video made it look like she was supposed to represent the hooker :pachaha:

Okay.

That wasn't my intent and I don't think so. Her and I are dancing, kissing, sitting together on a bench, dressed fly. We're showing the world a hip hop couple.

Major label rappers have challenges keeping girls long term.

I show something that's not too common in hip hop - a long term relationship.

Can anyone post any recent examples of that?
 

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Is this supposed to be some kind of flex? You're telling on yourself... 42 years old and been single 66% of your adult life!

Probably because you look like you got that progeria disease, lookin like a terminally ill middle aged white man in 4XL hoodies

This you fam?

maxresdefault.jpg


Now you're online bytchin coz people are talkin about your girl when you're the one who dragged her outta bed and put her in your video before she even ran a hairbrush through that hedgerow of a hairdo.

Do better bro before you lose that bytch.. truth be told, you probably already have if this video is anything to go by.. I mean, look at this part here..



She bends over in front of you twerkin and you're stood there like a blind man waiting for the lights to change. The fukk you doin? All you can bring yourself to do is rub her back... carry on like this and boy, you'll be rubbing her back while she's in hospital giving birth to another man's baby.

As for the music? Your whole style is some retarded, very poorly executed pastiche of early Cage Kennylz.... from the delivery, the style.. Everything about it is unoriginal and comes across false.

Respectfully.


I've been in a 5+, 3 year + relationship and dated.

You know what's good? That philosophy of sex after marriage - it avoids problems.

Your talking shyt and about disease - keep that in your own world kicko.

Post a photo of yourself and your girl. Cause now you're looking like a coward. A p*ssy.

I'm not bytching about anything crumb.

My album is done. It's an album by a rapper who's in a 3 year + ppl passionate relationship.

It's locked in.

Lose that bytch? Don't call my girl a bytch coli troll 2356.

I put God first. I've had break ups. You sound like you're 20 paying or not paying child support.

What? You trying to cause fear in 2024?

Post photos of yourself, and ur bytch. Or you double down on being a cockroach.

Fronting on my dance moves...pssh...Puffy moves his shoulders and makes millions.

Puffy is strange tho.

I'm different. I have a shorty dance on me and we're excited after over 3 years together in 2024.

I'm trying to get the new vid to 1 million views.
 
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