New! Admiral Crumple - You're more of a Hooker than a Singer - Music Video on WorldstarHipHop!!!!!

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"Pretty certain"??? You should know all these things for sure. Are you hooked up with tunecore?

Also, you're selling USB sticks with the album and using mp3 files? Why are you being so proud of the time and care put into mixing and mastering as stated in a previous post but then diluting the product?

It's a shame you have such a disdain for hustlers, you could learn a thing or 2 from them, the successful ones get loyal customers by having the purest product and not cutting the work to weak sauce.

Why are you degrading the quality of the work?

I'm gonna get back to you. On my way to work.

I've got ppl flipping in the Worldstar comments.

It's on me. I'm trying to get this vid to a million views,
 

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Song is cool. As always, your vocals are the down point. Beat is good, bars are cool. You need to get with a pro level producer and engineer and figure out how to maximize your voice and approach. Your doubles/backing vocals are always too loud and not synced. IDK if that's intentional, but it's off putting. You have some shyt, but you have to make it at least somewhat pleasing to the ears. You're better than a lot of these wack YouTube rappers. You could carve a lane with some adjustments. You should submit your joints to reaction channels, though I'm sure you'll hear some of the same critiques.
 

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"Pretty certain"??? You should know all these things for sure. Are you hooked up with tunecore?

Also, you're selling USB sticks with the album and using mp3 files? Why are you being so proud of the time and care put into mixing and mastering as stated in a previous post but then diluting the product?

It's a shame you have such a disdain for hustlers, you could learn a thing or 2 from them, the successful ones get loyal customers by having the purest product and not cutting the work to weak sauce.

Why are you degrading the quality of the work?

I'm on most digital providers, not tunecore.

The usb cards (credit card size blank with Crumple tag) it's the .WAV files on those.

I love hustlers. Working hard and earning cash is great. But in terms of coke dealers? They're public responsibility is garbage.

The high quality art and .WAV file audio is available on the CDs and usb cards.

I sold a good amount before the album recently went digital.
 

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Your hook is kind of buried.

Essentially, the heart and soul of the vocals is the hook. The best songs have a hook that is an earworm that sticks with you.

Ideally the song switches gears between the verses and the hook. A bridge is also helpful because it's another change within the song.

Everything was pretty average. Beat was fine. Delivery was clear but a little low energy. I'd like to see more surprises lyrically.
 

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That's my girlfriend of 3 years, watch your mouth.

It's rare a rapper has a girlfriend or family. Maybe Gucci Mane, Ice T, Ice Cube.

The point of this video is me with my girl - the results we have, in love - showing girls they don't have to hoe and Men don't need to pay hookers.
No disrespect but the video made it look like she was supposed to represent the hooker :pachaha:
 

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@fakkitazzmods Crumple should at least get a 3 day sticky in the tunnel, a coli artist is a coli artist whether we fukk with their music or not.

I fukk with a couple mods but I know they're powerless to ban so I dont know if they can even sticky threads or I woulda @ yawl directly.

I do want a sticky. I don't know who to ask. Still have to check the Coli masthead.
 

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Song is cool. As always, your vocals are the down point. Beat is good, bars are cool. You need to get with a pro level producer and engineer and figure out how to maximize your voice and approach. Your doubles/backing vocals are always too loud and not synced. IDK if that's intentional, but it's off putting. You have some shyt, but you have to make it at least somewhat pleasing to the ears. You're better than a lot of these wack YouTube rappers. You could carve a lane with some adjustments. You should submit your joints to reaction channels, though I'm sure you'll hear some of the same critiques.

Thank you Triple agent, I always dealt with you.

Alot of ppl said that about my adlibs. They are intentional and a bit off when I do them because I feel it's the art of my vocal production. I have little intricacies and harmonies within.

I did do a joint per request with NO adlibs on any of the verses. Only the chorus. The person who asked for it loved it.

It's below please listen to it on quality speakers/headphones and let me know what you think.

I may do a no adlib straight hip hop track for the heads on a Premier beat.

Here's the no adlib joint

 
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