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Big Pun - this n!gga reads like an advanced textcee

You can catch me in the cherry red one-fifty
Got the grizzy locked in the stizzy
Pop the clizzy goin sixty down a one-wizzy
Drunk pissy, tryin to cruise through the avenue
While my peoples is poppin bottles up in ?Sue's rendevous?
fukk that, spun the U-ey lost a hubcap
It's back to the shack - came back and now, "What's that?"
Straight from Paris, checkin Gaby's new baby carriage
Perry Ellis (nice), auburn cherry reddish
Fresh out the dealer, got the Tec for the squealers
Wear a vest for the killers, nuttin less cause it's reala
in the Big Apple, where it's quick to get your shyt tackled
Enemies spit at you, best friends kidnap you
Trust no one (eh eh) got beef bust yo' gun
You don't need no one (nope) talkin bout that you owe him
I'ma go for dolo - Scarface without Manolo
One deep, I be solo, bustin heat, throwin bolos, it's hard

yea his rhyme schemes match perfectly on the bar measure
 

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and he's knockin off 4-5 word rhyme schemes seamlessly. I always gave em the edge. but i been soakin in pun and i believe he is technically better than Em. Him and Big L.

well the best mc i ever head is kool g rap and pun got his style from g rap imo

I keeps my for-ty-five loaded with dum-dums, in rear I hold this

right at my waist for just in case some-bo-dy gots to get ex-ploded

Cause G. Rap ain't that nikka that try to play so nikka lay low
or get yourself a pair of wings, a harp, and a halo

Clown, keep fukkin around, and you'll be dead G

I'm spittin out the lead see, to split your fukkin head like the Red Sea
 

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ppl been tellin me that G rap is a pioneer but i find it harder to get into 80's and early 90's cuz i ain't a big fan of the beats back then.
 

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You can catch me in the cherry red one-fifty
Got the grizzy locked in the stizzy
Pop the clizzy goin sixty down a one-wizzy
Drunk pissy, tryin to cruise through the avenue
While my peoples is poppin bottles up in ?Sue's rendevous?
fukk that[/]b, spun the U-ey lost a hubcap
It's back to the shack - came back and now, "What's that?"
Straight from Paris, checkin Gaby's new baby carriage
Perry Ellis (nice), auburn cherry reddish
Fresh out the dealer, got the Tec for the squealers
Wear a vest for the killers, nuttin less cause it's reala
in the Big Apple, where it's quick to get your shyt tackled
Enemies spit at you, best friends kidnap you
Trust no one (eh eh) got beef bust yo' gun
You don't need no one (nope) talkin bout that you owe him
I'ma go for dolo - Scarface without Manolo
One deep, I be solo, bustin heat, throwin bolos, it's hard

maybe i overstated the craziness of the multis but compared to whats out there today. he is light years more advanced. i woulda bolded some more but some bars are flat out just multis :manny:
 

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i refuse to conform
You can catch me in the cherry red one-fifty
Got the grizzy locked in the stizzy
Pop the clizzy goin sixty down a one-wizzy
Drunk pissy, tryin to cruise through the avenue
While my peoples is poppin bottles up in ?Sue's rendevous?
fukk that[/]b, spun the U-ey lost a hubcap
It's back to the shack - came back and now, "What's that?"
Straight from Paris, checkin Gaby's new baby carriage
Perry Ellis (nice), auburn cherry reddish
Fresh out the dealer, got the Tec for the squealers
Wear a vest for the killers, nuttin less cause it's reala
in the Big Apple, where it's quick to get your shyt tackled
Enemies spit at you, best friends kidnap you
Trust no one (eh eh) got beef bust yo' gun
You don't need no one (nope) talkin bout that you owe him
I'ma go for dolo - Scarface without Manolo
One deep, I be solo, bustin heat, throwin bolos, it's hard



u got the concept right but multis to me are syllables that not only rhyme but match in syllable count

MULTIES - Basic & Advanced

I see a lot of people on the site (both newbs & vets) not knowin what multis are & identifyin them wrong... so i thought id drop this guide usin some good examples i used on the site (No, it aint recyclin lol)

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bla bla dikk bla bla kick bla bla thick
bla bla quick bla bla stick bla bla trick
^ A lot of people think that is a multi because you rhyme the same sound multiple times, but that IS NOT a multi...

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Multi means multi-syllable rhymin...
This is basically a link up of words with the same amount of total syllables that are used more than once in a bar & sound similar

For example:
Stabbin this kid with used needles, providin infections-that-maim
Might be good, but ill smear ya rep worse than an election-campaign

They sound the same and have the same syllable count... syllables are just the amount of sections you cut the words down into...

In-fec-tions-that-maim - 5 Syllables
E-lec-tion-cam-paign - 5 Syllables

That keeps the flow on point and gives your multi a hard hittin edge
If your multis dont have the same syllable count, it makes your flow sound off and they will not be anywhere near as effective



You can use multis in sets of threes or more as you get better with them, for example:
Ill haunt-and-maim-ya, youll want-a-saviour
Coz ill put you in pain for weeks like a torture-chamber

Haunt-and-maim-ya - 4 syllables
Want-a-sav-iour - 4 syllables
Tor-ture-cham-ber - 4 syllables



You might even wanna try usin 2 sets of multis, like this:
Your flows-so-hopeless-kid, for real im rapin-your-script-son
Leave your bones-all-broken-bytch with this blazin-enscription

Flows-so-hope-less-kid - 5 Syllables (Set 1)
Bones-all-bro-ken-bytch - 5 Syllables (Set 1)
Ra-pin-your-script-son - 5 Syllables (Set 2)
Bla-zin-en-scrip-tion - 5 Syllables (Set 2)

and here is a rhyme dictionary called rhyme zone that will help you with what rhymes and what don't rhymes

http://www.rhymezone.com/?loc=bar
 

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i hear you b. but if u use too big of words u gonna end up like cannibus. dope as f*ck but only hardcore lyrical fans, not many, are going to buy it.

i think if u wanna be technical and still appeal in the mainstream the best way to still be technical is prolly to string together 1-2 syllable words. its proly easier to talk about anything like this too. anything more and ppl mite just not pick up what ur trying to say. and ur gonna limite urself to scientific sounding sh!t/
 

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You can catch me in the cherry red one-fifty
Got the grizzy locked in the stizzy
Pop the clizzy goin sixty down a one-wizzy
Drunk pissy, tryin to cruise through the avenue
While my peoples is poppin bottles up in ?Sue's rendevous?
fukk that[/]b, spun the U-ey lost a hubcap
It's back to the shack - came back and now, "What's that?"
Straight from Paris, checkin Gaby's new baby carriage
Perry Ellis (nice), auburn cherry reddish
Fresh out the dealer, got the Tec for the squealers
Wear a vest for the killers, nuttin less cause it's reala
in the Big Apple, where it's quick to get your shyt tackled
Enemies spit at you, best friends kidnap you
Trust no one (eh eh) got beef bust yo' gun
You don't need no one (nope) talkin bout that you owe him
I'ma go for dolo - Scarface without Manolo
One deep, I be solo, bustin heat, throwin bolos, it's hard

maybe i overstated the craziness of the multis but compared to whats out there today. he is light years more advanced. i woulda bolded some more but some bars are flat out just multis :manny:



yea pun was dope in terms of multis and easily light years of dudes
 
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