Married and Divorced twice before 30.

[Roland Coltrane]

 

[#1 pick]

I would be in jail for murder if he was not already in jail. Aside from my parents and siblings. . She showed me the most love EVER. Now she had her ways. . And we did not agree. But like I said it was never hate or anger. Just we were different. And she was literally one of the nicest people I had ever met in my life. So I KNEW she did not cause this. Hell even if she did she is not a physical threat AT ALL.


I visited her two more times and I had to stop. . It was too much brehs. . For one I was feeling hella guilty and petty as fukk!!! If we never got the divorce that I pushed for this never would have happened. I started thinking and re thinking it. I had a good chick! I let her go back to the wolves and she got eaten. It took me a minute to get over that feeling to be honest.

I would always call her fam and check in. At least 4 times a week. Me and her fam were cool. I spent so much time with them ( forced ) that they were my down south family. They told me the bad news. She def has brain damage. . Most likely will never have the mental capacity past a 11 year old. That is the age of the kids she was teaching. Her career is done. . . I was

They gave her oldest sister power of attorney for her. So she was taking care of everything. I was like cool. One day her moms called me frantic asking if I can help! I said what? Her sister decided to short sell her 4 bedroom house. . Along with all the possessions inside. . . . . I was


Sometimes family is the cruelest brehs. While she was in the hospital. . She short sold the house. .ALL OF HER STUFF TOO. Sold her car. The truck I got was declared a total loss and the insurance paid the rest of the note off. But the sis sold all her shyt!! And used the money to buy herself a new house. . . and opened a FAILED used tire shop for her husband.


There was literally nothing I could do. . We were no longer married. . And the house was in her name. She had it before we met.. . . Her moms was sick!!! Janet had money from the school board and disability. . But it was not a whole lot. . Her savings got eaten up too by therapy and shyt. When she eventually got out of the hospital she moved in with her parents.


They took care of her. . She forgot how to cook, all kinds of shyt mane. I did not want to see her brehs. . It hurt too much. But. . . . . .She would call me once a month. She would think we were still married and she would call and we would chat. Its like she remembered the good times. . She did not even remember the dude AT ALL.

Damn man, you couldn't fight for her to see a medical specialist to do someone with her anxiety issues. I am listening to "Never make a promise by Dru Hill.

 

[General Mills]

Mills is back, life stories told through post
nikkaz actin' like I sold you dope
Like I told you wife thots...no...
Mills did that so hopefully you won't have to cuff no hoe

I tell these true tales,
To let them know what a nikka look like when a nikka always fails,
Show em how to move in a world full of L's.

 

[General Mills]

Also one trick to draw in your readers is writing free really short stories and posting them on kindle for $0.00. Make sure that they are really really good so that you can build a fan base. Then once you see people lining up to read write a great piece and sell it for $0.99. Remember to keep your audience enthralled. It looks like you are going to end up doing commercial fiction.

I am genuinely interested in this.

 

[Heelish]

A+++ storytelling. The cliffhangers taking me back to Breaking Bad just fiending for the next episode

 

[Redwing80]

When I first met her kids her 11-12 year old cornered me in the hallway one time and said. . You know me and my mom have the same taste in men. Lil girl was built like a grown woman. . . I literally ran out of the trailer.

My nikka... I'm mad I I got here late

 

[agnosticlady]

I am genuinely interested in this.

Seriously look into it. Also try to join writing clubs and get experienced people to review your writing. Also PLEASE copyright all that you write. My creative professor at first thought it would be silly to do that until one of his books was stolen and made into a movie. He NEVER received a dime. Copyright ALL of your work that you share with the public even if it is free. I say to speak to people who are truly interested in writing and have it as a skill because they will give you good criticism on your work. All of us enjoyed your story BUT I know that it takes more than that to create a good story. Aspects such as character development, dialogue according to character and setting, setting, plot, the movement of the story, and etc really make a story. You have the foundation, so you should continue. Do not put this talent to waste. I say this because throughout your story of the first marriage a lot of us had feelings towards the characters even if we did not know them.That shows that you can create good characters. Commercial fiction is when an author creates a story that revolves mostly around the plot. The characters follow the plot. Also the novels and etc are very popular. Examples are Twilight, some Stephen king novels,a lot of young adult fiction, and etc. Some commercial fiction is good, and some are terrible. Literature is harder to write. Books like Little Women, Huckleberry Fynn, Bluest Eyes, Things Fall apart, We are no longer at ease, One hundred years of Solitude, and the list goes on are all literature. It is a well rounded story. It is not even about whether it is real or not, but about whether it is believable in your writing. So even if your stories are who's to say? They all sound believable. Look at how much hatred we had towards the first wife yet we do not know her or have any idea about whether she is real or not. Ultimately, who cares the story is believable.


With that being said, seriously look into getting into the world of writing. It's a tough and harsh world because real professional criticism will make you want to quit at times. Try to get criticism from all races and backgrounds of people so that you know how to defend your writing objectively, and become a better writer. Also know when to take criticism seriously and when to just throw it in the trash. Look for other black authors and take their critics and advice seriously because it will be black people mostly reading your work. Join writing clubs offline and online. Take creative writing classes at your local community college. READ, READ, READ, READ. Read fiction and nonfiction. Read things you do not care to read. If you are used to reading history try to read romance and horror. Good luck and I wish you the best.

 

[dynamik]

Everything with her was controlled. . Even the garage sales and thrift stores. . She had a specific circuit she would go on for garage sales. She had been doing it for years. . I once told her that in my old neighborhood they always had garage sales we should hit them up. She acted like that was simply ridiculous. She visited the same three thrift shops and only one flea market. . I told her there is a huge thrift shop on Beach Blvd and we should go to the Pecan Park Flea Market. It is way bigger than the one you go to. She was

I'm thinking she had some type of aspergers which is on the Autism spectrum.

 

[peppe]

Man that last part really fukked me up. To everyone saying he should have stayed...

The feeling of being unhappy each day KILLS your soul deep inside. I'm going through it and fukk me, it's adding years to my face/body.

 

[.༼-◕_◕-༽.]

Shoulda droppped some scripture on her. The good books says you must honoreth thy husband and your husband wants to go see Transporter 3!

Gotta agree here. A wife is not supposed to deny her husband companionship or any reasonable requests for activities. As a woman, I go places and do things (outdoors type) that I wouldn't normally do because that makes him happy and he wants me to be there with him. Plus, I feel safe doing those things with him. I've had a lot of good adventures that way.

 

[dterpsss]

88 Users and 50 guests

Riveting but still nowhere near Densha Otoko's thread in Japan....

I think that was like 250 users but 1000+ guests

link?

 

[Neuromancer]

Don't go to amazon.

 

[Reginald Noble]

link?

I was actually looking for it but that forum was closed like 10 years ago unfortunately and there are no archives of it...Only know of it through my Japanese friend

 

[YaBishh]

I been trying to tell you Gen. You talented bro, I tried to holla at my boy who does Trae tha Truths cartoon, but he busy with that. But I know a Hit when i see/hear it just like in music. This is poetry breh, the stories you type out for fun can definitely make you a millionaire trust me. All them L's will give you a Big W if you down to do it.

Call it, "Life of L's". Have a similar cover like Life of Pi, but with a caricature of you on a Navy Ship. fukk the job you got right now. Quit that shyt, and write these L's! You can revolutionize the Online book with the use of your Gifs. You can make a website. Have a Online book w/ gifs(find out the legal side of this though), hard, and soft copy books. Trust me, You gonna get this W that you deserve. You know this whole site supports you, why not the world? I Put it on my life that you will succeed if you do this. Get your money and travel and find Mini Gen breh!

I'll Buy each copy 10x. You got the skills, but do you have the WILL to do it? Just Do it, no Nike. My G, I truely wish you the best, and that goes to each and everybody in this site. I wanna see everybody succeed, even these hoe ass troll/haters. Like akademiks did, he successful from stealing everything he hears from us on this site and being a culture vulture, nikka is basically an at home TMZ reporter, and i know he getting paid from ad views.

I dont even want anything from you breh, I just want you to get That Ultimate Victory. Trill spill, Love yall, go get it by any means man.

Also, Becareful on who to trust with this. I say self publish and copyright all.

 

[analog]

I am genuinely interested in this.

Breh I'd gladly contribute if you needed some startup money.

Spoiler

Just break a breh some change if you make it big :mjplspinkie: