CAVEMAN
PyrexPyramid
"I'd take the grave or a bid
to let some dirty clan members run up in my crib
And plant cracks on the man that's goin to church
Plants packs on the man that's goin to work
And build cases, meanwhile they daddies and they brothers
Is recruitin all my brothers and cousins to fill bases"
that is exactly Jay Electronica's rhyme scheme. You can even hear Nas deepen his voice in the middle of it in the same way Jay Electronica would sound. I think that's definitely some co-authorship.
also, the lines that preceed it:
"This is the Genesis, and I don't even see a worthy arch nemesis
I get loose like the Jena 6, they put a noose on 'Pac
Now I'm defendin Vick, and free that nikka TIP"
stand out to me as something Jay Electronica would write, especially given that he even has a song titled 'A Prayer For Michael Vick & T.I.'
now while Stic.Man & Jay Electronica are both saying officially on the record that they didn't "ghostwrite" -- if you look at Stic.Man's full statement he states clearly that they DID "collaborate" on lyrics:
"My contributions to his album was a collaboration and an honor and under his direction of what he wanted to convey and say."
"And I assisted where it was requested with ideas, beats and some writing. Not because Nas "needed" me lol..."
so you can see that it's stated clear as day that Stic.Man DID write for the album. They're just not officially calling it "ghostwriting," they're calling it "collaboration." Which is kinda disingenuous to me, the word "collaboration" in rap terms means they're featured ON the song. So they're playing with semantics to soften the idea.
& honestly, it's not really ghostwriting either -- it's something that happens in every studio session, -- you get feedback from your peoples in the studio like "Nah, dont spit it like that, here say this"
from the producers, to the engineers, to friends, label people, groupies smoking weed, anybody in the room is gonna prolly have lil ideas about what's gonna make the song better.
however this case is a kinda different situation -- cause Stic & Jay aren't just his peoples that randomly happened to be in the room. They were specifically brought on board & requested to be there for that specific purpose.
it's still not that big of a deal in my mind, but it's dirty that they're pretending that NOTHING happened.
to let some dirty clan members run up in my crib
And plant cracks on the man that's goin to church
Plants packs on the man that's goin to work
And build cases, meanwhile they daddies and they brothers
Is recruitin all my brothers and cousins to fill bases"
that is exactly Jay Electronica's rhyme scheme. You can even hear Nas deepen his voice in the middle of it in the same way Jay Electronica would sound. I think that's definitely some co-authorship.
also, the lines that preceed it:
"This is the Genesis, and I don't even see a worthy arch nemesis
I get loose like the Jena 6, they put a noose on 'Pac
Now I'm defendin Vick, and free that nikka TIP"
stand out to me as something Jay Electronica would write, especially given that he even has a song titled 'A Prayer For Michael Vick & T.I.'
now while Stic.Man & Jay Electronica are both saying officially on the record that they didn't "ghostwrite" -- if you look at Stic.Man's full statement he states clearly that they DID "collaborate" on lyrics:
"My contributions to his album was a collaboration and an honor and under his direction of what he wanted to convey and say."
"And I assisted where it was requested with ideas, beats and some writing. Not because Nas "needed" me lol..."
so you can see that it's stated clear as day that Stic.Man DID write for the album. They're just not officially calling it "ghostwriting," they're calling it "collaboration." Which is kinda disingenuous to me, the word "collaboration" in rap terms means they're featured ON the song. So they're playing with semantics to soften the idea.
& honestly, it's not really ghostwriting either -- it's something that happens in every studio session, -- you get feedback from your peoples in the studio like "Nah, dont spit it like that, here say this"
from the producers, to the engineers, to friends, label people, groupies smoking weed, anybody in the room is gonna prolly have lil ideas about what's gonna make the song better.
however this case is a kinda different situation -- cause Stic & Jay aren't just his peoples that randomly happened to be in the room. They were specifically brought on board & requested to be there for that specific purpose.
it's still not that big of a deal in my mind, but it's dirty that they're pretending that NOTHING happened.