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[DialeKt757]

 

[DialeKt757]

 

[KushSkywalker]

It was alright

You got a lot of internal rhyme structure and good multi syllable patterns. Good on paper.

But like some others said there is a bit of a lack of presence and delivery.

Not a lot of oomph to it. Keep at it though. The pen is pretty good.

 

[DialeKt757]

I'm back negroes.

 

[Dixon Cider]

once i get my studio up and running i will send u some beats.

im trying to become a producer and ghost writer.

*things people say*

 

[NormanConnors]

Not bad breh, can you rap over grimy/Dusty sample type beats?

 

[NormanConnors]

I got the 2nd verse

dope shyt

How often y'all record/where can cats send beats

 

[DialeKt757]

Not bad breh, can you rap over grimy/Dusty sample type beats?

Give me an example

 

[ImmaGetJoeClarkArrested]

dope shyt

How often y'all record/where can cats send beats

We're really working right now so anything you send is appreciated 80walimusic@gmail.com

 

[DialeKt757]

We're really working right now so anything you send is appreciated 80walimusic@gmail.com

Take your bytch ass out of my post. You one star my thread, but then you have the nerve to promote your bullshyt on my page? FOH you backwards ass nikka.

 

[NormanConnors]

We're really working right now so anything you send is appreciated 80walimusic@gmail.com

Take your bytch ass out of my post. You one star my thread, but then you have the nerve to promote your bullshyt on my page? FOH you backwards ass nikka.

can't we all get along, you both should collab

 

[JAY?]

So I'm the only one who found this shyt wack?

 

[NormanConnors]

Give me an example

Like some J Dilla or madlib shyt

 

[TheKang]

Your problem is your voice

and I mean that like it sounds like u are reading off paper... your voice even though u probably aren't

so the cocky and confidence is missing, breath control vicious and you got multis, but u seem like u thinking hard to stay on beat and rapping in your normal speaking voice which is more like reciting words

 

[DialeKt757]

Your problem is your voice

and I mean that like it sounds like u are reading off paper... your voice even though u probably aren't

so the cocky and confidence is missing, breath control vicious and you got multis, but u seem like u thinking hard to stay on beat and rapping in your normal speaking voice which is more like reciting words

Smh do you and everybody else not realize that I'm in a room that is causing my voice to echo?