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[DialeKt757]

this aint lyrical bro

How is it not? My schemes alone makes these nikkas look basic. I take it you don't know what a multi-syllable scheme is, huh. Besides, it wasn't meant to be no metaphor heavy verse, just something I was having fun with, smh. I see I gotta post another vid, something more lyrical for y'all, smh. III'll do that tomorrow.

 

[ManBearPig]

How is it not? My schemes alone makes these nikkas look basic. I take it you don't know what a multi-syllable scheme is, huh. Besides, it wasn't meant to be no metaphor heavy verse, just something I was having fun with, smh. I see I gotta post another vid, something more lyrical for y'all, smh. III'll do that tomorrow.

lol keep doing your thing playa.

 

[Poetical Poltergeist]

Like I said, you try to move around and rap all of that without missing a word. I'm sure you didn't even listen to the track I posted. Here's an actual recorded track.

I Did listen to this track. And that's what I was critiquing. I'm a rap fan first, and if the flow and delivery is off it will show. Not saying u wack, but there's an evolution to this shyt. How long have you been recording full tracks?

 

[DialeKt757]

I Did listen to this track. And that's what I was critiquing. I'm a rap fan first, and if the flow and delivery is off it will show. Not saying u wack, but there's an evolution to this shyt. How long have you been recording full tracks?

I just posted this how did you already listen to it? Also, I'm on beat. There's not even a drum in the background, lol. Listen to my Deeper track earlier in this thread bruh.

 

[kingdizzy01]

So everyone sounds like this? Please, reference a song that sounds similar, with style and content, and I'll never post in here again.

bone thugs
crucial conflict
do or die
twista
any muthafukka from the midwest.

but ur shyt sounds just like some Machine gun kelly shyt.

GTFOH

 

[Poetical Poltergeist]

I just posted this how did you already listen to it? Also, I'm on beat. There's not even a drum in the background, lol. Listen to my Deeper track earlier in this thread bruh.

I listened to it bruh. I thought they were the same for some reason. But like I said the delivery is not just being on beat but sounding smooth when the line is delivered. Sounding like it's effortless. Not hurried nor sounding like it's being read off a note pad.

 

[DialeKt757]

bone thugs
crucial conflict
do or die
twista
any muthafukka from the midwest.

but ur shyt sounds just like some Machine gun kelly shyt.

GTFOH

Okay bruh, lmao. There is NO ONE on that list that does multi's like me, or have the same song content. Shall I drop a few lines to demonstrate?

And I look at life through these slanted eyes, I keep a narrow perspective
They say my arrogance is careless and reckless
But my heritage I inherited is barely accepted
I'm nefarious I put fear in those who don't care to respect it

Now read that aloud to yourself, and maybe that will give you some kind of grasp on the idea of what a multi is. None of those nikkas you named does that. Just a few syllables rhyming with maybe the end of each bar. Before you try to be a smart ass, have knowledge of what you're speaking on, cause you'll only look dumb. You're what they call a "smart dumb nikka," lmfao

 

[DialeKt757]

I listened to it bruh. I thought they were the same for some reason. But like I said the delivery is not just being on beat but sounding smooth when the line is delivered. Sounding like it's effortless. Not hurried nor sounding like it's being read off a note pad.

I never read off a pad, lmao. I have all of my lines memorized by the time the song is done. I can link my first open mic performances, if you like. Never choked not once during my first time up there. I don't need a pad to rap off of.

 

[Poetical Poltergeist]

I never read off a pad, lmao. I have all of my lines memorized by the time the song is done. I can link my first open mic performances, if you like. Never choked not once during my first time up there. I don't need a pad to rap off of.

Well since u are an expert already no need to discuss further. Good luck.

 

[DialeKt757]

Well since u are an expert already no need to discuss further. Good luck.

I'm sorry, how long have you been in the industry and/or making music? lol

 

[pointproven214]

Okay bruh, lmao. There is NO ONE on that list that does multi's like me, or have the same song content. Shall I drop a few lines to demonstrate?

And I look at life through these slanted eyes, I keep a narrow perspective
They say my arrogance is careless and reckless
But my heritage I inherited is barely accepted
I'm nefarious I put fear in those who don't care to respect it

Now read that aloud to yourself, and maybe that will give you some kind of grasp on the idea of what a multi is. None of those nikkas you named does that. Just a few syllables rhyming with maybe the end of each bar. Before you try to be a smart ass, have knowledge of what you're speaking on, cause you'll only look dumb. You're what they call a "smart dumb nikka," lmfao

bravo half of these dudes don't even rap or even care about rap or if they do suck or even care about rap techniques so they don't even know what they talking about lmao.

 

[kingdizzy01]

Okay bruh, lmao. There is NO ONE on that list that does multi's like me, or have the same song content. Shall I drop a few lines to demonstrate?

And I look at life through these slanted eyes, I keep a narrow perspective
They say my arrogance is careless and reckless
But my heritage I inherited is barely accepted
I'm nefarious I put fear in those who don't care to respect it

Now read that aloud to yourself, and maybe that will give you some kind of grasp on the idea of what a multi is. None of those nikkas you named does that. Just a few syllables rhyming with maybe the end of each bar. Before you try to be a smart ass, have knowledge of what you're speaking on, cause you'll only look dumb. You're what they call a "smart dumb nikka," lmfao

if this kid only knew

aight some real criticism for that ass:
you sayin a whole lotta shyt nobody cares about and you trying to hard. you should refocus your lyrics on something that actually means something instead of some life-reflection shyt soundin like jaden smith's tweets. your mic presence is weak. rap from your gut, not your nose. if u tryin to be a rappity ass rapper, u need to read more books to build your vocabulary and know wtf u talkin about otherwise it just sounds like the shyt u just wrote.

with that said:

PS- i been in the recording industry for 15 years.

 

[Poetical Poltergeist]

I'm sorry, how long have you been in the industry and/or making music? lol

U posted tracks to show off your talent. If u can't handle criticisms u won't last. I've worked on music and mc'd for 13 years. I'm not a professional but I know good hip hop when I hear it. Especially raw talent. U have raw talent but it's not polished. U may get there but don't shun off people criticisms. I never called u wack. Just noticed things that need to be worked on.

 

[DialeKt757]

U posted tracks to show off your talent. If u can't handle criticisms u won't last. I've worked on music and mc'd for 13 years. I'm not a professional but I know good hip hop when I hear it. Especially raw talent. U have raw talent but it's not polished. U may get there but don't shun off people criticisms. I never called u wack. Just noticed things that need to be worked on.[/QUO

I can respect that. I like the fact you're civil about the way you go about things. Props to you bruh.

 

[DialeKt757]

How are you

if this kid only knew

aight some real criticism for that ass:
you sayin a whole lotta shyt nobody cares about and you trying to hard. you should refocus your lyrics on something that actually means something instead of some life-reflection shyt soundin like jaden smith's tweets. your mic presence is weak. rap from your gut, not your nose. if u tryin to be a rappity ass rapper, u need to read more books to build your vocabulary and know wtf u talkin about otherwise it just sounds like the shyt u just wrote.

with that said:

PS- i been in the recording industry for 15 years.

gonna tell me about my music when I've got music you haven't even listened to? You haven't been in the damn industry gtfoh with that fukkboy shyt, real talk. I broke down the complexities of my schemes and you tell me I can't? nikka I'm SUPPOSED to talk about my life. That's the only point in putting out the shyt I do cause it's MY art and a reflection of self. Go to my soundcloud. I have various topics discussing everything that's happened in my life. I'm sorry I'm not rapping about bytches, money and turning up. FOH.