I think he was trying too hard to be RZA, so it all gets lost. RZA is unique to pull off though. If he talks more assertive, he loses the Zen master angle he seems to be going for, and the voice...
The one thing I like, but also hate about this show is how they aren't even touching on a fraction of RZA's intelligence. They've mentioned it, but it's what made this entire thing work. But I do like how they're using that time to display Divine & Power's contributions and intelligence, and every one else's creative process.
I feel like they did a good job of showcasing his intelligence AND maturity during the second half of season 2. Even with a tv show it would be near impossible to show just HOW much a genius RZA was with having to tell EIGHT OTHER stories as well as Divine and Power’s stories as well. Its a hard nut to crack but I feel the show has really done the best that anybody could and having RZA himself at the helm helps add authenticity to it.
This season seems to be focusing on the musical aspect and the pressure RZA was under to deliver all of those solo albums BY HIMSELF which in itself showcases a level of genius that nobody in Hip Hop has ever achieved. Not Premier, not Kanye, not Manny Fresh, NOBODY did what RZA did. Plus he was the creative mind behind most of the videos, art work, promo material, AND was ghostwriting ODB’s lyrics (alongside GZA)
They’re subtly showing all of that this season and the toll it took on him. Dude got all of the Wu living good in a mansion while he’s holed up in a basement stressing about making deadlines. Not showering. His girl left him. ODB out doing stupid reckless shyt and RZA gotta cover for him by making TEN BEATS IN ONE NIGHT!