The song is trash, let's get that out of the way.
You needed a hotter chick to play the main girl, ain't nobody trying to look at a chick who's barely a 7 in a music video.
Don't know what the budget was but that 'club' looked way too much like a factory hall you put some props in.
Editing needs to be tighter. That transition to the car scene was way too on the nose noticeable, but the car scenes are the best in the video.
Btw, breakdancing to house makes no friggin' sense, breh.
Seriously, what was the budget on this? I've got an instrumental 80's throwback song or two lying around that could use a low budget throwback video so it feels like I'm actually 'pushing' my music career.