WIll my friend ever land a job with this cover letter?

[Sad Bunny]

As a graduate from ********** University with a bachelor’s degree in Corporate Communications, I am writing to express my interest in a coordinator position with the *********.

As a marketing assistant at*********I’ve had the opportunity to
proofread numerous newsletters to distribute to clients, assist in event planning to help distribute what the job entails. I also created their organizational resume that explains the company’s background.

Since the Children’s Hospital of ******* are interested in having strong independent leaders, I should note that I have trained numerous employees and completed demanding tasks under strict time schedules.

 

[Takerstani]

He should get numerous call backs.

 

[JahBuhLun]

Your friend should just use a cover letter template and fill in the blanks with the relevant information.

 

[Ricky Church]

they're gonna wipe their dikks with that cover letter

 

[Sad Bunny]

Your friend should just use a cover letter template and fill in the blanks with the relevant information.

i gave him mine

i feel bad, man.

 

[Shameonyou]

yea at the junkyard

 

[HelgaPataki]

a lot of the cover letter templates i've read generally went

paragraph 1: introduce yourself and how you found out about the job
2: more in detail how you qualify for the job

i can't remember the rest but your friend's letter has no flow and grammar mistakes.

 

[beenz]

That cover letter doesn't sell himself enough. It's just really generic.

 

[Dirk Diggler]

Doesnt use a cover letter, doesnt care

 

[pbconnect]

is that only the first part or is there more?

 

[Amestafuu (Emeritus)]

i gave him mine

i feel bad, man.

I thought u work @ McDonald's... what u need a cover letter for?

 

[ThaBoyBam]

Reads like wrote that shyt.

 

[ryda518]

This man obviously doesn't use the "read it to yourself out loud" method when sending information.

 

[Sad Bunny]

I thought u work @ McDonald's... what u need a cover letter for?

part-time, nikka. I have a college education and a career.

 

[Sad Bunny]

is that only the first part or is there more?

that is it

he emailed it to me

i just gave him mine and said "fill in the blanks"