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Kool G Rap:
Ayo, I represent Queens, on crime scenes a murder machine
Put M-16's in nikkas spleens
So head for the hills nikka, cuz when I get ill
It's blood spilled for real
I aim my fukking steel and shoot to kill
So grab your bodyshield get ready for the dustin'
The biscuit that I'm clutchin'
Puffin' like cess but that's the fukking dutchman
Buckin' at all you sucka cluckin nikkas that want the ruckus
We'll be three nikkas who's clappin' but we ain't applaudin' you motherfukkers
Keep my mack hid up under back, two shots to crack lids
Ain't gotta go rush to Toys R Us to get you Cabbage Patch Kids
Once I let the laser beams gleam and the red dots are seen
Your whole team is getting blown to smithereens
Queens on the motherfukking map nikka, we stay strapped
In fact I let a AK cap push out your toupee back
Running with mad sons gunning shyt up and leave your hit up for the funds
nikkas better stick to they gunz
 

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Kool G Rap:
Ayo, I represent Queens, on crime scenes a murder machine
Put M-16's in nikkas spleens
So head for the hills nikka, cuz when I get ill
It's blood spilled for real
I aim my fukking steel and shoot to kill
So grab your bodyshield get ready for the dustin'
The biscuit that I'm clutchin'
Puffin' like cess but that's the fukking dutchman
Buckin' at all you sucka cluckin nikkas that want the ruckus
We'll be three nikkas who's clappin' but we ain't applaudin' you motherfukkers
Keep my mack hid up under back, two shots to crack lids
Ain't gotta go rush to Toys R Us to get you Cabbage Patch Kids
Once I let the laser beams gleam and the red dots are seen
Your whole team is getting blown to smithereens
Queens on the motherfukking map nikka, we stay strapped
In fact I let a AK cap push out your toupee back
Running with mad sons gunning shyt up and leave your hit up for the funds
nikkas better stick to they gunz

this is a ok verse but im talking about having a perfect flow.
 

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Amil] Yo, A to the M-I, feminist
Holdin the semi, leave nikkaz faced with a dilemmi
Am I, gon' run or stay, can I get away no you can't can't I surrendi?
And I, lazy bop, Mercedes hot
In my way through the tunnel like Lady Di
 

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OK VERSE????? lol prob G Raps best verse... in terms of EVERYTHING

his flow was fukkin perfect on this

that's ok a verse imo multis is not what this thread is about

the rhyme placement did not match with the bars
there was no vocal inflection no meter no clear enuncation this was far from a flawless.
 

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OK VERSE????? lol prob G Raps best verse... in terms of EVERYTHING

his flow was fukkin perfect on this

but since u want to talk about that that deck verse i posted was better.

I bomb atomically, Socrates' philosophies
and hypothesis can't define how I be droppin these
mockeries, lyrically perform armed robbery
Flee with the lottery, possibly they spotted me
Battle-scarred shogun, explosion when my pen hits
tremendous, ultra-violet shine blind forensics
I inspect you, through the future see millenium
Killa B's sold fifty gold sixty platinum
Shacklin the masses with drastic rap tactics
Graphic displays melt the steel like blacksmiths
Black Wu jackets queen B's ease the guns in
Rumble with patrolmen, tear gas laced the function
Heads by the score take flight incite a war
Chicks hit the floor, diehard fans demand more
Behold the bold soldier, control the globe slowly
Proceeds to blow swingin swords like Shinobi

Stomp grounds and pound footprints in solid rock
Wu got it locked, performin live on your hottest block
 
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