UPDATE: Download "Adios" by NoDotWon aka @FruitOfTheVale

[The Intergalactic Koala]

I dig it. It reminds me of some early to mid 2000 NO type of shyt. Like some vintage Juvenile type of stuff.

 

[tonyclifton]

This is nice man

Daps and reps

 

[Doomsday]

Have you thought about making a video and uploading it to to channels like Thizzler on The Roof and shid like that?

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

I dig it. It reminds me of some early to mid 2000 NO type of shyt. Like some vintage Juvenile type of stuff.

I take that as a high compliment

Have you thought about making a video and uploading it to to channels like Thizzler on The Roof and shid like that?

I've definitely been thinking about that, I just started writing down some video concept ideas for this song. Not sure when it will happen though

 

[Doomsday]

I've definitely been thinking about that, I just started writing down some video concept ideas for this song. Not sure when it will happen though

The way you rapped in the very beginning was different. Hard to pinpoint it but it was Method Man like, you should try rapping a whole song like that. The beat is solid and you can rap but there's something unexplainable missing. It doesn't sound like your skating through the song if that makes sense. Like your trying to rap instead of just blacking out. A juvenile type flow would be perfect for this song. Again it's hard to explain but I don't believe you, your lyrics are disgruntled but you don't sound disgruntled. Canibus is a perfect example of someone who sounds disgruntled all the time. Sounds like you ran out of steam by the end. I have a theory that consumers can "hear" your thoughts and emotions, keep that in mind next time. But I love the devil voicebox that Montana 300 always uses and liked that you used it as well.

If anything at least I really listened to the whole song a couple of times.

 

[CrownHeights]

You got potential OP, real potential. Not feeling the beat as much but the flow's on point.

Now feed us some more

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

The way you rapped in the very beginning was different. Hard to pinpoint it but it was Method Man like, you should try rapping a whole song like that. The beat is solid and you can rap but there's something unexplainable missing. It doesn't sound like your skating through the song if that makes sense. Like your trying to rap instead of just blacking out. A juvenile type flow would be perfect for this song. Again it's hard to explain but I don't believe you, your lyrics are disgruntled but you don't sound disgruntled. Canibus is a perfect example of someone who sounds disgruntled all the time. Sounds like you ran out of steam by the end. I have a theory that consumers can "hear" your thoughts and emotions, keep that in mind next time. But I love the devil voicebox that Montana 300 always uses and liked that you used it as well.

If anything at least I really listened to the whole song a couple of times.

This is great feedback Respect for taking the time to write down your thoughts bruh, I appreciate it fr

 

[CrownHeights]

The way you rapped in the very beginning was different. Hard to pinpoint it but it was Method Man like, you should try rapping a whole song like that. The beat is solid and you can rap but there's something unexplainable missing. It doesn't sound like your skating through the song if that makes sense. Like your trying to rap instead of just blacking out. A juvenile type flow would be perfect for this song. Again it's hard to explain but I don't believe you, your lyrics are disgruntled but you don't sound disgruntled. Canibus is a perfect example of someone who sounds disgruntled all the time. Sounds like you ran out of steam by the end. I have a theory that consumers can "hear" your thoughts and emotions, keep that in mind next time. But I love the devil voicebox that Montana 300 always uses and liked that you used it as well.

If anything at least I really listened to the whole song a couple of times.

Your like a poet with your critiques

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

For everybody who liked the beat it was another coli breh that made it @KillSpray

 

[FruitOfTheVale]

All the day 1s who been supporting since I started posting my music on here

@Ronnie Lott @Khadafhi @hex @Poitier @Chip Skylark @Raymond Burrr @NormanConnors @Grizzly @Super Future Luther King Jr. @Big Rufus 2x Mack Zaddy @livewire @longhairedchef @FreedMind @Wacky D @R$G META @MrFettuccinePockets @IronFist @GetyourWalkonENYCE @MrWestGrand @Jerz-2 @head shots101 @dora_da_destroyer @OGBobbyJohnson

 

[Khadafhi]

I'll check it out. Give me a sec

 

[Poitier]

I'm check it in the AM fam

 

[dora_da_destroyer]

All the day 1s who been supporting since I started posting my music on here

@Ronnie Lott @Khadafhi @hex @Poitier @Chip Skylark @Raymond Burrr @NormanConnors @Grizzly @Super Future Luther King Jr. @Big Rufus 2x Mack Zaddy @livewire @longhairedchef @FreedMind @Wacky D @R$G META @MrFettuccinePockets @IronFist @GetyourWalkonENYCE @MrWestGrand @Jerz-2 @head shots101 @dora_da_destroyer @OGBobbyJohnson

Was wondering why you tagged me on a song from last year, but I see it's updated you drop your album yet?

 

[head shots101]

this hard.....flow nice on this

feeling the beat

 

[Free White & 21]

Is this an updated version of the song. I think i heard this one last year - maybe only the first verse?

Either way it's dope as usual. Stay focused on your music and perfecting your craft