this maybe the most complex rhyme scheme ever written

[pointproven214]

His (A) palms are (B) sweaty, (C) knees weak, (A)arms are (B) heavy (C)
There's (A)vomit on his (B)sweater already,(C) (A)mom's (B) spaghetti (C)
He's (D) nervous (E), but on the (D)surface (E) he looks (A) calm and (B) ready (C) - eminem lose yourself

 

[Peabo Bryson]

Nah Celph Titled takes the cake on this one. Never heard a rhyme scheme stretched this long.... sadly this is underrated and virtually unknown outside of the underground scene. I can dig it though.

Em has some of the craziest shyt though...levels beyond most.... insane with the "multis" in his Slim Shady era.

 

[pointproven214]

Nah Celph Titled takes the cake on this one. Never heard a rhyme scheme stretched this long.... sadly this is underrated and virtually unknown outside of the underground scene. I can dig it though.

Em has some of the craziest shyt though...levels beyond most.... insane with the "multis" in his Slim Shady era.

disagree just from a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme the patterns in these two lines forget the other verses in loseyourself
or hell even the rest of the first verse on loseyourself the rhyme pattern in these three lines are ridiciulous.

but props to you for actually talking about rhyme schemes and giving fukk about lyrical skill.

 

[Peabo Bryson]

Yeah maybe I jumped the gun, but this song is fun/amusing. It's more of a gimmick I guess vs. Em's crazy technicals and the fact that Em is actually talking on a topic and killing it....vs. Celph on this song just saying brag/ignorance shyt.

 

[Nobodyknows]

@Malcom Rhyme King

Till I collapse I’m spilling these raps long as you feel 'em
Till the day that I drop you'll never say that I'm not killing them
'Cause when I am not then I'ma stop pinning 'em
And I am not hip-hop and I’m just not Eminem.
Subliminal thoughts when I'm stop sending them women are caught in webs spin and hock venom
Adrenaline shots of penicillin could not get the illing to stop.
Amoxacillin is just not real enough.
The criminal cop killing hip-hop filling a minimal swap to cop millions of Pac listeners.
You're coming with me, feel it or not you’re gonna fear it like I showed you the spirit of god lives in us.
You hear it a lot, lyrics that shock is it a miracle or am I just a product of pop fizzing up.
For shizzel my wizzel this is the plot listen up you bizzels forgot slizzel does not give a fukk.

 

[pointproven214]

Yeah maybe I jumped the gun, but this song is fun/amusing. It's more of a gimmick I guess vs. Em's crazy technicals and the fact that Em is actually talking on a topic and killing it....vs. Celph on this song just saying brag/ignorance shyt.

yeah eminem actually can intertwine rhyme schemes and stay on topic while rhyming complex

only people can do that is three nas rakim and makaveli aka 2pac.

 

[Prince Cairo]

What about this?

 

[The Guru]

Palms sweaty mom's spaghetti

 

[pointproven214]

What about this?

what about it.

 

[AyBrehHam Linkin]

His palms are spaghetti, knees weak, arms are spaghetti
There's vomit on his spaghetti already, moms spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and spaghetti

 

[Suspicious Dingo]

His palms are spaghetti, knees weak, arms are spaghetti
There's vomit on his spaghetti already, moms spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and spaghetti

 

[Broke Wave]

@charmander

 

[Inspect Her Deck]

rhyme schemes?

in honour of the cac mamba

[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14:
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

 

[Thief's Theme]

lol

mom's spaghetti

 

[charmander]

@charmander

wallahi