the rhyme king's Official EMINEM Thread

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[Nas]
Check the shyt
My mindset, son got wet, I'm vexed really
They snatched off his Rolex, smacked his bytch silly
Why nikkaz actin illy word to Will he bout to feel it
I feel it, he shoulda been dealt wit it
Them nikkaz sour, they put to much flour in they coke
And got the nerve to wonder WHY THEY BROKE
While we was gleamin, nikkaz was scheamin
Seen the ill Beamers beamin
Triple-beam and doublin cream, had em feenin
to get they fingers on the dosa, I called Sosa
Sosa, these nikkaz hit the God, bring the toaster
Meet me in the 'Bridge I'm bout to go loca
Left my 'rat beggin me to stay and stroke her
He came through with two fly bytches, Venus and Vicious
wit two macs inside the Volvo, what up God, I'm still sober
I need some Henn' to bend me over
My nikka Hav got a soldier
It's gettin down it's goin down kid (I got this, I got this)
I heard he might not live, I'm holdin back tears
Told these broads, to put it in gear
with two females that don't smile diggin they style yo
Whattup son, these nikkaz done started somethin wild
You know the clique well, Ramel with the gold in his grill
Tried to get a name holdin the steel, I paid attention to the females
Maintain bytches when it get real
Sos' pulled me close and told me the deal
He said both hoes'll peel, spray shots and reload
and still handle the wheel, point em out smoke a Phil' then chill
I layed back Escobar status, knowin The Firm got it cornered
We on it, shyt we was born wit

Exits Thread...

Spoiler

Left the keys in the van, with a gat in each hand
Went up in Eastland and shot a po-liceman
fukk a peace plan of citizen bystands
But shyt is in my hands, here's your life span
For what your life's worth this money is twice than
Grab a couple grand and live a nice land
See I'm a nice man but money turned me to Satan
I'm thirsty for this green so bad I'm dehydratin'
Hurry up with the cash bytch, I got a ride waitin'
Shot a man twice in the back when he tried escapin'
I want the whole pie, I won't be de-nied nathan
Maybe I need my head in-side straightened
Brain contemplatin', clean out the register
Dip before somebody catches ya
Or gets ya description an' sketches ya

 

[the rhyme king]

Left the house, pullin' out the drive backin' out
Need a backin' out this lady's Jag started blackin' out
Pulled the Mac-10 out, stuck it in her face
Shut ya yackin' mouth before I blow the brain from out the back ya scalp
Drug her by her hair, smacked her up
Thinkin' fukk it, mug her while you're there, jacked her up
Stole her car, made a profit
Grabbed the tape from out the deck and offed it out the window
Like the girl on Set It Off did
Jetted off kid, stole the whip, now I'm a criminal
Drove in thru somebody's yard, dove into they swimmin' pool
Climbed out and collapsed on the patio
I made it out alive but I'm injured badly though
Parents screamin': "Son, go in and call the police

 

[prophecypro]

In terms of rhyme pattern and aggressivness with words..sure its not far fetched to say Em got Nas on that

In terms of substance and concept creativity? I think Nas might have the edge over him.

 

[the rhyme king]

Will Smith don't gotta cuss in his raps to sell his records;
well I do, so fukk him and fukk you too!
You think I give a damn about a Grammy?
Half of you critics can't even stomach me, let alone stand me
"But Slim, what if you win, wouldn't it be weird?"
Why? So you guys could just lie to get me here?
So you can, sit me here next to Britney Spears?
shyt, Christina Aguilera better switch me chairs
so I can sit next to Carson Daly and Fred Durst
and hear 'em argue over who she gave head to first

 

[DaveyDave]

@ Nas not having multis like Em, no use even arguing the point tho

 

[DaveyDave]

How are you the rhyme king and you miss the green

and you fukk up the blue (that's not a rhyme)

i've been trying to think of a way to highlight his mistakes

 

[BlackDiBiase]

Nas beats eminem in all aspects of writing, metaphors, multis, or whatever words used to describe a dope MC. Nas took like 2 gears off since the 2000's but Nas does his multis and makes sense and still captures pictures.

Only thing Em might have Nas on, is his ability for hooks and even then its 50/50.

Check this out from Nas QB album 2001 : (multis a like deity and he told a story on sense and on point)

[NAS]
Third grade singing star spangled banner
using proper manners
learnt to handle anger animal behavior
later on my block rocking with my jocks on
eating Bon Ton chesse popcorn
humming a KISS rock song
socks long to my knees
summer breeze running through the leaves playing freeze tag
can I stay out please dad
can I hang out with my little gang out
hearing shots rang out
heard my moms call my name out
come upstairs run up stairs
take a bath shyt stained underwear
wipe yourself with paper bad
little ass in my bed at 8:30 wash my plate
ate dinner up late
gazing at the wall praying basketball
was my future for this young one
hooping in the sun
proud to be where I come from
later shooting guns fantasizing
fascinated by gold rope chains
looking back at my hood days
but things aint changed

really they need to bring back public floggings, it do some of yall real good.

Nas is hella lazy thats all Em got him on.

 

[Vilified not verified]

pay rhymes with day?

 

[Sierra Mist]

I like your gimmick. Ever consider joining the Silver Hammer Society?

 

[Tunes]

http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss85/sprodo_proo/YallnikkazPostinInATrollThread.jpg

 

[Seth Brundle]

My life is full of empty promises
And broken dreams
I'm hoping things will look up
But there ain't no job openings
I feel discouraged hungry and malnourished
Living in this house with no furnace, unfurnished
And I'm sick of working dead end jobs with lame pay
And I'm tired of being hired and fired the same day
But fukk it, if you know the rules to the game play
Cause when we die we know were all going the same way
It's cool to be player, but it sucks to be the fan
When all you need is bucks to be the man
Plus a luxury sedan
Too comfortable and roomy in a six
They threw me in the mix
With all these gloomy lunatics
Walk around depressed
And smoke a pound of ses a day
And yesterday went by so quick it seems like it was just today
My daughter wants to throw the ball but I'm too stressed to play
Live half my life and throw the rest away

when has nas ever rhymed like this

I don't think you understand rhyming, so you just bold on the beat (on a random OLD song, no less) to push your fairytales.

 

[Flav]

"rhymeking" is a idiot.

he used to do this same shyt on sohh.

the sad part is he is not trolling.

 

[The_Third_Man]

Why Nas in particualr though?
Why not just say "eminem would rap circles around every rapper"?

 

[Nate Plisken]

why did u bold the whole thing when alot of what u bolded did'nt even rhyme

 

[the rhyme king]

eminem better then all these dudes.