the rhyme king's Official EMINEM Thread

[the rhyme king]

Have you ever had the feelin' that you was bein' had?
Don't that shyt there make you mad? They treat you like a slave
Put chains all on your soul and put whips up on your back
They be lyin' through they teeth, hope you slip up off your path
I don't switch up, I just laugh, put my kicks up on they desk
Unaffected by they threats, then get busy on they ass
See, that how that Chi-town made me, that's how my daddy raised me
That glitterin' may not be gold, don't let nobody play me
If you are my homeboy, you'll never have to pay me
Go'n and put your hands up, when times is hard, you stand up
L-U-P the man, cuz, the brand that the fans trust
So even if they ban us, they'll never slow my plans up

 

[Versa]

This thread has been made countless times even when the answer is obvious.

Eminem has more complex rhyme schemes with the multiple syllables and shyt.

Lupe is lyrically superior in every other possible category and has superior content to boot. Doubles, triples, metaphors, etc it's not even close, and his rhyme schemes are still strong.

It's a lot easier to have complexity in your schemes when you aren't saying shyt.

 

[ROFL_GUY]

This thread has been made countless times even when the answer is obvious.

Eminem has more complex rhyme schemes with the multiple syllables and shyt.

Lupe is lyrically superior in every other possible category and has superior content to boot. Doubles, triples, metaphors, etc it's not even close, and his rhyme schemes are still strong.

It's a lot easier to have complexity in your schemes when you aren't saying shyt.

As I fall deeper into a manic state I'm a prime candidate for the gene to receive the drug addict traits
Blood pressure climbs at a dramatic rate I seem to gravitate to the bottle of night quil then I salivate
Start off with the night quil like I think I'll just have a taste
Couple sips of that then I gradually graduate
Too a harder perscription drug called Valium like ya that's great I go to take just one and I end up like having eight
Now I need something in my stomach cause I haven't ate Maybe I'll grab a plate of nachos and I'll have a steak
And you'd think with all I have at stake
Look at my daughters face... Mommy somethings is wrong with dad I think
He's acting weird again he's really beginning to scare me Won't shave his beard again and he pretends he doesn't hear me
And all he does is eat dorritos and cheetos
And he just fell asleep in his car eating three musketeers in the rear seat

Sometimes I feel so alone, I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before,
So lonely and cold, It's like something takes over me, Soon as I go home and close the door,
Kinda feels like deja vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
But I can't and I won't say I tried but I know that's a lie cause I don't
And why I just don't know...

Maybe just a nice cold brew what's a beer That's the devil in my ear I been sober a fukking year
And that fukker still talks to me he is all I can fukking hear
Marshall come on we'll watch the game it's the cowboys and buccaneers
And maybe if I just drink half I'll be halfed buzzed for half of the time
Who's that mastermind behind that little line With that kind of rational man I got half a mind
Too have another half of glass of wine sound acinine Ya I know
But I never had no problem with alcohol
Ouch look out for the wall aim for the couch I'm about to fall I missed the couch and down I go looking like a bouncing ball
shyt must have knocked me out cause I ain't feel the ground at all Wow what the fukk happend last night where am I
Man fukk am I hungover and god damn I got a head ache
shyt half a vicodin why can't I? "All systems ready for take off please stand by"

Sometimes I feel so alone, I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before,
So lonely and cold, It's like something takes over me, Soon as I go home and close the door,
Kinda feels like deja vu, I wanna get away from this place I do, But I can't and I won't say I tried but I know that's a lie cause I don't
And why I just don't know...

So I take a vicodin splash it hits my stomach and ah
A couple weeks go by it ain't even like I'm getting high
Now I need it just not to feel sick ya I'm getting by
Wouldn't even be taking this shyt if deshaun didn't die
Oh ya there's an excuse you lose proof so you use
There's new rules it's cool if it's helping you to get through
It's twelve noon ain't no harm in self inducing a snooze
What else is new fukk it what would Elvis do in your shoes
Now here I am 3 months later full blown relapse
Just get high until the kids get home from two homes relax
And since I'm convinced that I'm in-somniac I need these pills to be able to sleep so I take 3 naps
Just to be able to function throughout the day let's see
That's an ambian each nap how many Valium 3
And that will average out to about one good hours sleep
OK so now you see the reason how come he
Has taken 4 years just too put out an album beat
See me and you we almost had the same outcome heath
Cause that Christmas you know the nomonia thing
It was Bologna was it the methadone ya think
Or the hydrocodone you hide inside your pornos
Your VCR tape cases with you ambian cr great places to hide ain't it
So you can lie to Halie I'm going beddy bye Whitney baby good night Elaina
Go in the room and shut the bedroom door and wake up in ambulance
They said they found me on the bathroom floor

Sometimes I feel so alone, I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before,
So lonely and cold, It's like something takes over me,
Soon as I go home and close the door,
Kinda feels like deja vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
But I can't and I won't say I tried but I know that's a lie cause I don't
And why I just don't know...

 

[Versa]

EDIT: It's a lot easier to have complexity in your schemes when you aren't saying shyt 95% of the time.

My bad.

 

[ROFL_GUY]

EDIT: It's a lot easier to have complexity in your schemes when you aren't saying shyt 95% of the time.

My bad.

just admit you havnt listened to 95% of EM's material

or are you telling me you have listened to all his songs?

undercover fan?

or

dont know what your talking about..

which is it?

 

[Versa]

just admit you havnt listened to 95% of EM's material

or are you telling me you have listened to all his songs?

undercover fan?

or

dont know what your talking about..

which is it?

Eminem was one of my favorites growing up and I've heard all of his albums. I believe he wastes his talent most of the time on nonsensical subject matter and occasionally drops songs worthy of his skill level, but the former scenario far outweighs the latter.

That's MY opinion. You're free to have yours.

 

[the rhyme king]

This thread has been made countless times even when the answer is obvious.

Eminem has more complex rhyme schemes with the multiple syllables and shyt.

Lupe is lyrically superior in every other possible category and has superior content to boot. Doubles, triples, metaphors, etc it's not even close, and his rhyme schemes are still strong.

It's a lot easier to have complexity in your schemes when you aren't saying shyt.

breh rhyme schemes aren't the end all be all of rapping i agree lupe better but he got ill rhyme schemes too

and eminem ill with metaphors wordplay and punchlines it's closer then u think it is that category same with lupe and rhyme schemes.

 

[ROFL_GUY]

@versa i can respect that ^

 

[STUFF]

I feel like I mistakenly opened the door to the ladies room.

Should have read the sign on the door, my bad.

 

[the rhyme king]

first of all accuse myself, for being a fool..
all attempts to school myself have failed
to improve means to remove myself
from this pool of sharks dark as the mood I felt...
Im loosin fuel, its all the food I refused myself
thats how you do (how we do) when you do yourself
And if I lose I can never excuse myself
til i grow old sit back and accrued my wealth..
You dont stand a chance,
matter fact, u dont have half the stance (nope) to stand if u stood half a chance
like C-H-A, to dance wit this man from the C-H-A's
give it up, just abandon plans
since U dont have half the stance like an amputee,
U dont have half the pants that it takes to command a family, a fan, or command a fee..
So u will never get the ransom u demand from me!
The goodnews' my foot's loose, my hands are free,
so I dance all foot-loose and fancy free..
Big ups to Footloose and all the fans of me,
my fanbase spans from Vans to Timberlands, from
Mansions to section 8 campers, B..
Im they chamion n I aint even sound standard, see

 

[the rhyme king]

So give it to this lamb to please, so help me G-d imma kill it, thats my word
remove this blind fold, just
give us a chance to see!!
N imma quit it the minute it abandons me!!
My plan's to be
here for a minute then im finished, im vamping, G
most of these cats is pussies, pearl-tongues, oysters n clams to me!! Flinstone money!
Cant even stand bein in they glances, jeez!!
They say its lookin good, but from my vantage, B
shyt is sinkin like At-lantis be!
im more set than Atlantis.. (whispering/mumbling)
Yall not un-der-standing me??
Am I speaking Spanish, B??!
well adios, homes! i look like a sloppy joe? (yeah) what am I, a Manwich, b?!!
I gotta Big Mac, if U wanna sandwich, G!!
Who else U know keep the McD tucked wit the Windy on his shoulder...? I told ya..
Give it up dog, its over


He came back
In the same suit that he was buried in
Similar to the one his grand father was married in
Yes... he was still fresh todeath
bling, twoear-rings, a chain laying on his chest
Hestillhad it cuz they couldn't find it
And the bullets from his enemies sat like two inches behind it
smelled the Hennesy from when his nikkas got re-minded
and poured out liquor in his memory, he didn't mind it, But...
He couldn't sip it fast enough
So the liquor was just filling the casket up
floating down by his feet was the letter from his sister
Second Grade hand-writing simply read "I miss ya"
Suit jacket pocket held his baby daughter's picture
Right next to it one of his man's stuck a swisher
He had a notion as he laid there soaking
Saw that the latch was broken, he kicked his casket open
and he...

 

[the cac mamba]

they both have heavenly rhyme schemes, as if God himself strung their words together.
idk this is a tough nail biter. did you here em's rhymes on wide awake though? omg, so good. i gotta go with em man.

 

[JayBaldacci]

sarcasm is hard to detect on the net.

 

[OnlyInCalifornia]

Shut the fukk up Yauze you fakkit ass arab.

 

[The Ruler 09]

I voted Lupe.