The Hon. Stringer Bell's Response to Matt504's Diss Track :(

[b_b]

You tried breh

 

[Strapped]

Good effort the intro is dope , you should of ask @Ugo Ogugwa or @Hathaway for a beat . The flow is all wrong . Should been faster & harder

 

[DrexlersFade]

You’re improving OP, flow coming along nicely

Keep it up!

@The poster username

 

[jj23]

Breh sounds like he could stop at any minute and start sobbing uncontrollably...

 

[I'm Blackman]

Kool Moe Dee in a business suit

Father help me.

 

[Estarossa]

 

[Anton]

 

[Knuckles Red]

Pros:
- Your voice is silky, masculine and smooth
- I like the beginning of the song with the talking and piano
- Your dedication to Idris Elba is both admirable and understandable
Cons:
- The start of your rapping was too abrupt. A better transition was needed
- The production could have been a bit better
- Maybe say the n-word less. Its unnecessary and hurt my ears to hear it

Overall, good job. Not as good as @Matt504, but you put in a good effort. 8/10!!!

I’m loving these songs!!

 

[breakfuss]

Pros:
- Your voice is silky, masculine and smooth
- I like the beginning of the song with the talking and piano
- Your dedication to Idris Elba is both admirable and understandable
Cons:
- The start of your rapping was too abrupt. A better transition was needed
- The production could have been a bit better
- Maybe say the n-word less. Its unnecessary and hurt my ears to hear it

Overall, good job. Not as good as @Matt504, but you put in a good effort. 8/10!!!

I’m loving these songs!!

When we figure out whose alt account this belongs to.

 

[Neo. The Only. The One.]

Actually this aint bad

@The Hon. Stringer Bell got a funny sounding voice for rapping but the bars is legit

 

[ChatGPT-5]

the only good part was the intro....and thats cause it was Idris lol.

 

[JulesMusic719]

Matt audio engineering, audio equipment, and actual flow / music theory is better.

You come off as try hard while he comes off effortless with way better quality



You can ignore the feedback, but you could also come back better or stop if you'd take it in

nikka said he got better music theory

 

[old pig]

Breh sounds like he could stop at any minute and start sobbing uncontrollably...

 

[Rekkapryde]

If you spent as much time on your career, you'd be an accomplished lawyer by now

yall nikkaz are hell

 

[Rekkapryde]

Imagine getting a ‘law degree’ just to post struggle diss tracks on thecoli