say brehs..i chopped up this sample this morning :jawalrus:

[cacmatic]

word, i dont rap (really lol) so ive just been making instrumentals with no real purpose of structuring a song...if i make a pattern/loop i find dope im just playin it for a lil then switchin to the next flip/chop..

i appreciate the feedback man, thanks!

nice chops, i like the beat, dont love the drums but i dont hate em either
whats the name of the sample, shyt is dope, i want to try my own version of it

 

[OGmittee]

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/sdonns/5-16-hm-smp]5 16 HM smp by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world[/ame]



imma just be chopping all day lol

 

[HarlemsOwn]

@OGmittee

I don't sample heavy as much as I used to, but here's one



5 16 Pal2 smp by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

sampled another part of the same track...not tryin to bother you but im really workin on my cuts and shyt lol if u feel like givin this a 2nd one a listen itd be appreciated

this just my opinion my nikka

im never one to sugar coat anything

cause i feel like to be better you gotta hear the real

this shyt was terrible

the intro from 0:00 to 6 seconds had a nikka like

sounded like it was gonna be epic

but from 10 seconds to 16 i was like

that transition was bad my nikka

the beat dont sound full son

it sound like its still hungry for other sounds

i dont have any knowlege of the diff beat terms like hi hats or 808s or nothing

but this shyt need some other sounds in it

ya intro be hard as fukk

but the transitions and the middle be terrible

i dont even make it to the end

its hard to give advice on what to do when this isnt my hobby or profession

but i have a real good ear for what sounds good

look at this video

you see how he got all those diff sounds

this what you should do

 

[HarlemsOwn]

5 16 HM smp by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world



imma just be chopping all day lol

this one is the best out of all three

but are you making beats to be rapped over or are you just playing around with the samples?

i know its bad to compare and shyt

but i think you could take that beat you have and turn it to something serious

when i heard yours i thought of this

 

[OGmittee]

this one is the best out of all three

but are you making beats to be rapped over or are you just playing around with the samples?

i know its bad to compare and shyt

but i think you could take that beat you have and turn it to something serious

when i heard yours i thought of this

French Montana - Playing In The Wind Instrumental - YouTube

im just making instrumentals..if someone were to ask me if they could rap over one i might make the structure a little more common to an actual song..

i love that french montana song so im glad it reminds you of it, appreciate the feedback too. im trying to get better so i need the critique. i'll try turning the hats up on that one that you said needed more sounds lol i agree the transition couldve been smoother after 6 seconds as well

 

[OGmittee]

just gonna keep droppin my beats in here for those interested and getting feedback..

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/sdonns/5-17-hm-2]5 17 HM 2 by SDONNS on SoundCloud - Hear the world[/ame]

 

[wingzboy]

fire breh