ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

[YourSavior]

em aye dolla sign eeee

 

[the rhyme king]

Penitentiaries is packed with promise makers
Never realize the precious time the bytch nikkas is wasting
Institutionalized I lived my life a product made to crumble
But too hardened for a smile, we're too crazy to be humble, we balling
Catch me father please, cause I'm falling, in the liquor store
That's the Hennessee I hear ya calling, can I get some more?
Hail 'til I reach Hell, I ain't scared
Mama checking in my bedroom; I ain't there
I got a head with no screws in it, what can I do
One life to live but I got nothing to lose, just me and you
on a one way trip to prison, selling drugs
We all wrapped up in this living, life as Thugs
To my homeboys in Clinton Max, doing they bid
Raise hell to this real shyt, and feel this
When they turn out the lights, I'll be down in the dark
Thuggin eternal through my heart, now Hail Mary nikka

 

[the rhyme king]

my fav is ryu imo his zoning optio selects etc is top notch.

 

[Green negs and spam]

The "Saikyo Legend"

 

[the rhyme king]

Enter my world of doom, consume fear and feel the panic.
I ram a lightning bolt between the earth and the moon and curl the planets.
I'm bell Atlantic with lyrics expanding for galaxies.
Battle me mathematically, I'm giving your wisdom a cavity.
Rapidly flowing, controlling the time, jump over the line.
I'm blowing your mind, with just a flow of the rhyme.
I'm Hogan in his prime, too strong and fast, nikkas' could bomb and blast.
C'mon, you still beyond your wrath.

 

[the rhyme king]

Yo, first of all son, peep the arson
Many brothers I be sparking and busting mad light inside the dark
Call me dough snatcher, just the brother for the rapture
I handglide, holding on strong, hard to capture
Extravagant, RZA bake the track and it's militant
Then I react, like a convict, and start killing shyt
It's manifested, the Gods work like appliances
Dealing in my cypher I revolve around sciences
The 9th chamber, leave you trapped inside my hallway
You try to flee but you got smoked up by the doorway
No question, I send your ass back, right to the essence
Your whole frame is smothered in dirt, now how you resting
While I'll be trapped by sounds, locked behind loops
Throwing nikkas off airplanes cause cash rules
Everything around me, black, as you can see
Swallow this murder one verse like God Degree
Then analyze my soundtrack for satisfaction
You adapt like a flashback chain reaction
(Lace them nikkas, son)

 

[Yoda]

ayo I think rhyme king actually wrote all this.

 

[the rhyme king]

 

[the rhyme king]

 

[tybo]

Absolutely my FAVORITE song by the R!!!!

"Shells lay around on the battleground,
Dead bodies are found thoughout the town,
Tried to put shame in my game and make a name,
I'ma put it on a bullet and put it in ya brain!!!"

 

[big bun]

The best soundtrack cut ever.

 

[the rhyme king]

A brand new morn, no time to yawn
Shower's on, power's on
Late for school, I catch the train
Girls sip "Cristal" and whisper my name
I push up like an exercise,
Check the intellect and inspect the thighs
Select the best one, pull her to the side
Keep her occupied for the rest of the ride
Read my resume she's know I'm 'ready cool
Just meet me after school,
We can moan and groan until your mom come home ,
And you be calling me Al "dope" Capone.
Sweatin' me, she didn't want to let me loose-
Come get me, that's if you want to sip the juice
Cause the streets await me, so I take my gun off safety
Cause alot of nikkaz hate me
Coming out of the building, they set me up
Sprayed wit automatics, they wet me up
In a puddle of blood, I lay close to the edge
I guess I didn't know the ledge.....

complex rhyming at it's best.

 

[tybo]

The best soundtrack cut ever.

EVER!!!!

Winter Warz is a distant second.

 

[the rhyme king]

 

[the rhyme king]

aaaa or abab rhyme scheme for 16 bars same shyt.