ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

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With all this extra stressing
The question I wonder is after death, after my last breath
When will I finally get to rest? Through this suppression
They punish the people that's asking questions

And those that possess, steal from the ones without possessions
The message I stress to make it stop study your lessons
Don't settle for less even the genius asks questions
Be grateful for blessings, don't ever change, keep your essence

The power is in the people and politics we address
Always do your best, don't let the pressure make you panic
And when you get stranded and things don't go the way you planned it
Dreaming of riches, in a position of making a difference

Politicians and hypocrites, they don't wanna listen
If I'm insane, it's the fame made a brother change
It wasn't nothing like the game
It's just me against the world
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This record has the best 1st song and last song I've heard on any rap album ever, outside of Illmatic.
 
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i was walking to my car in this parking lot one time & heard somebody playing So Many Tears, i looked over and it was some country ass white boy
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fukking classic:wow:

I'm just a young black male, cursed since my birth
Had to turn to crack sales, if worse come to worse
Headed for them packed, jails, or maybe it's a hearse
My only way to stack mail, is out here doin' dirt
Made my decisions do or die, been hustlin' since junior high
No time for askin' why, gettin' high, gettin' mine
Put away my nine 'cuz these times call for four-five sales
'Cuz life is hell and everybody dies:to:


Pac spoke from the heart:sadbron:
 
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the rhyme king said:
Can you picture my prophecy?
Stress in the city, the cops is hot for me
The projects is full of bullets, the bodies is droppin
There ain't no stoppin me
Constantly movin while makin millions
Witnessin killings, leavin dead bodies in abandoned buildings
Can't raise the children cause they're illin
Addicted to killin and the appeal from the cap peelin
Without feelin, but will they last or be blasted?
Hard headed basstard
Maybe he'll listen in his casket - the aftermath
More bodies being buried - I'm losing my homies in a hurry
They're relocating to the cemetary
Got me worried, stressin, my vision's blurried
The question is will I live? No one in the world loves me
I'm headed for danger, don't trust strangers
Put one in the chamber whenever I'm feelin this anger
Don't wanna make excuses, cause this is how it is
What's the use unless we're shootin no one notices the youth
It's just me against the world baby

pac easily had better rhyme schemes imo
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:dead: Can;t believe it took you until the second page breh
 
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Poitier said:
of course you would :russ:
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You don't like the song? lol. Bunch of classics on this, Me Against The World, It Ain't Easy, Can U Get Away. I don't know why you think I'm some old dude lmao... how old are you? lol. I'm probably not THAT far from your age, unless your like 12... which would actually explain a lot lol.
 
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