ronnie's official rhyme scheme/multisyllable/technical/lyrical/comparison/appreciation thread

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Gastly is Elzhi in disguise.

Surprised no one linked him to Form Follows Function or Unforgivable Youth. Or his verse on that Rick Ross song "poor decisions."
 

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Sure you have

Sleep at night? Man it aint that serious. You aint feeling Lu and you think he corny thats cool. No one losing sleep over it. I got real life shyt to worry about and could give a fukk about The Coli's respect or repuatation amongst the "hip-hop community". That shyt right there sounds so fukking corny its laughable. I come here to check out music from time to time and chop it up with a few cool posters. How is this thread even lame if you basically agreeing with the thread starter? It was cool and people were posting their opinions on why they felt the way they did and now you calling it corny b/c nobody agrees with you while you waving the Lu is corny banner. Do you even like El or he corny too?

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Elzhi is the rap version of a street ball dude...

Although hes entertaining, theres a reason why Hot Sauce never made it to the league.
 

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you wouldnt like me if i got gutter
you aint sharp enough to split butter

elzhi that dude!
 
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Lupe Fiasco – Animal Pharm Lyrics | Rap Genius



This song is so layered its unbelievable , I recommend to read the rap genius explanation . beautiful . Dont let the hate stop you from doing it . tear jerker.

[Verse 1]
Quiet as a kitten
Reply as silent as a Raphael-given instrument for stickin'
Or maybe riot as a lion
Would he tie in tiger for attention?
Tiggers and Poohs, nikkas and jews
Mr. Opulent Christopher Robinson too
Reversal like
When that predetermined term expires on a turtle's knife

What of Korea, are you scared?
Or is something not there,
like a Welsh rabbit full of hares
Animal farms and imaginary bears
The body is a house like a kangaroo pouch
Or an oyster-hoisted cow over crescent moons as it looms low in the night sky
Platoons of c00ns stand ready for the drive-by
Steady as the medley booms from the Akai
Affirm as in "Aye aye"
Like it the second
Like a junior, like a third, like a eye

Like a observe from the view of a bird as it fly high
Sitting heavy like spaghetti in the belly of a wise guy
Who let these G's out the PI_STY?
Seems they taking cues from The Wire
Okay decorum, and keeping you from wanting to buy it
But you still buy it like you never left its sight

And like a slow gunfighter gun: unfired
Cow dung walls, hermit crabs in the mall, sting ray from the stars and barnyard laws
These are

[Verse 2]
Quiet as a mouse in the House of God
In the jaws, like tyrants in the mouths of mobs
Ripping it to pieces like a picture and a preacher
If a cricket was a speaker, it's its own chicken bones on the garbage can top
Ugly mother freakers is predator, opposite, on top of it, to make it fox
So if similar appeal, administer the seal to make it real
Elephantine but never mind
Half-ton gorillas in a midst, they'll never find
Hungry as a hippopotamus, gobble it 'til your bottom and your body is as wobbly as Skrillex
Eeyores and Piglets, blind bats nailing tails to a riblet
Time only limited(ed) if you make it
Blind rat's nails hold tales of Unseeing Eye selves
Out is out, so they only seeing thy shells
Ghost Dog
Oh lawd
These are

[Verse 3]
The butcher says to the bovines
You're all just pastrami when it's showtime

Cowboy co-signs, attack the cat samples
Own worst enemies
Chop down the trees, we need the axe handles
Like a heel in a sandal saying "hell no"
Or you trapped like the yells of a nail in the shell-toe
Clever as a fishbowl on a sailboat
Landlocked as a ham hock on a railroad
Sandbox by the swimming pool
Two times as clever as a fishing school
Pills for the pressure
Broken seals on the pills for the pleasure

If you feeling ill, whatever
Animal farm, you're all dumb
Tickle 'em with your articulated thumb
A tapeworm will never play the drums, but um
 

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Man the ONLY aspect of rapping Elzhi exceeds Lupe is rhyming. Lu out-classes Elzhi in every other aspect. It's not even debatable, this nikka gotta go pick up a Fahrenheit 1/15 mixtape.
 

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MATW..I still like AOM better..but MATW kills illmatic in every way..pacs rapping real shyt he's done..not rapping about shyt he's seen staring out his window in queens bridge apartments watching drug transactions go down as he eats a bowl of Cheerios and plays street fighter 2 in his room
 
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